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Solve for X

Jul 30, 2009 19:30

Title: Solve for X
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Draco/Bellatrix, Narcissa
Wordcount: ~7500
Summary: The seduction of Draco Malfoy.
Warnings: Angst. Incest. Mild knifeplay. A bit of nongraphic violence & blood. A potentially underage Draco (he's 16ish here.)

( Solve for X )

warning: cross-gen, character: bellatrix (black) lestrange, rating: nc-17, pairing: draco/bellatrix, character: draco malfoy, warning: knifeplay, warning: underage, fic, character: narcissa (black) malfoy, fandom: harry potter, category: het

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lucianwolf July 31 2009, 01:26:04 UTC

ohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgod

sahsdfldfvksdajld;alsdfj.

Fuck. That was HOT. And visceral. And desperate and hopeless and dear god yes!

I'm so glad I found your journal. afaslkaf!!!

l3petitemort July 31 2009, 02:23:27 UTC

*blush*

thank you so much.

i am loving these two more and more all the time. i don't have much experience with writing dark things, so it's very encouraging to hear that i'm having some sort of success, haha. i'm certainly having fun.

and you are very, very kind. <3

lucianwolf July 31 2009, 02:26:00 UTC

I absolutely adore dark!fic. You're doing a wonderful job. :)

l3petitemort July 31 2009, 11:38:40 UTC

thank you, again.

out of curiosity, do you find my draco believable? ha... i have a hard time with him, figuring him out, and for me he's much harder than bella.

lucianwolf July 31 2009, 18:57:30 UTC

It's easy to write crazy people - they do as they like!

In the books there is a suggestion of Draco's home life, of power struggles, and only you get to decide how it affects him, in what way, and what doesn't.

Really, if his motivations are fleshed out, if believable reasons are given to explain his actions, even out-of-character actions are believable. (There's always a limit, but subtle explanation goes a long way.)

You may have a hard time with him, but he is tantalizing in his refusal to be understood, is he not? It is good to be intrigued by a character you write.

And yes, he is believable. :)

l3petitemort August 1 2009, 19:58:43 UTC

you're absolutely right... he fascinates me. i tend look at draco sort of like a cornered tiger.... you don't know whether the poor thing is going to piss itself or rip your throat out.

he's scared and ferocious all at once, and, ultimately, consumed with his own survival. i think he's very complicated, and he's a true challenge for me. i enjoy him very much.

and thank you again for taking the time to give me some feedback. it really means so much <3

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