i really like this fic. but it feels painful. there's that brooding heavy atmosphere which can only hint to an impending affliction. i knew it probably isn't, but i still feel that it's too one-sided for the doll, L.
anyways, i'm really interested for the 2nd part.
and by the way, i can't help but compare the fic characters to the EXO version. and i can't help but pinpoint adjectives which i think was supposedly meant only for luhan, and the ones for sungyeol. it was fun. and i'm drawing up similarities between infinite and exo now. *sigh*
i don't know how to explain, but my works always have that kind of aura. it's kinda blue and brooding and i can never write fluff as a result LOL. of course i'm trying to change my style, because this is really unhealthy. but it's hard to kill the habit ;___________; at first i was contemplating to choose between infinite and exo, and as it's based on "baby don't cry', i settled down with the latter. but while i was writing one of my myungyeol shipper buddies came by and read a bit. she also expected that it will also have another version for myungyeol so i was thinking like: "okay, it's not that i don't have this idea before." so eventually we have two version of this story. thanks a lot for your reading <3 btw, i've just posted the last part. you can read and kill me if you want ;________________;
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anyways, i'm really interested for the 2nd part.
and by the way, i can't help but compare the fic characters to the EXO version. and i can't help but pinpoint adjectives which i think was supposedly meant only for luhan, and the ones for sungyeol. it was fun. and i'm drawing up similarities between infinite and exo now. *sigh*
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at first i was contemplating to choose between infinite and exo, and as it's based on "baby don't cry', i settled down with the latter. but while i was writing one of my myungyeol shipper buddies came by and read a bit. she also expected that it will also have another version for myungyeol so i was thinking like: "okay, it's not that i don't have this idea before." so eventually we have two version of this story.
thanks a lot for your reading <3 btw, i've just posted the last part. you can read and kill me if you want ;________________;
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