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[diru69]

Title:  True Life
Author:  diru69
Chapter:  11/whatthefuckIdunno
Rating:  PG-13
Disclaimer:  I don't own Toshiya because Kyo does.
Summary:   "I looked at him deeply, straight in the eyes, like I was digging further and further inside his mind.  The weird thing is, I understood what he meant by doing that, summing it up into one tiny word that he had

Comments

[inbrilliantgrey]

Haha, really good chapter! Kisaki is such a girl.

[diru69]

lol inorite?

update...?

[lastsecretgarde]

when are you gonna post a new chapteeeeeer....???

You've left so many open ends! like what toshiya's "coping mechanism" is that isn't healthy, either.... and... and...... why he got that distant look to kyo's "good luck with that" about getting his band to go visual.... is he unhappy, too...?

hmmmmmmmm...?

are you gonna finish this one? it's been my favorite all summer! finally a fic that has the band members talking about toshiya as a great bassist and not just cute in a skirt. i love it!!!!!

more kyoXtotchi? yes? pleeeeease???

Re: update...?

[diru69]

for real? this was my
first fic, so I dont rly
like it because I thought
my writing style was a bit
off >.< I wasn't planning on updating
it, but if you want, I'll get working
on the next chapter once I finish chapter 2
of "Room 304, Cherry Blossoms of White Death"
^^ thx alot btw :)

Re: update...?

[lastsecretgarde]

Really??? I think it's terribly cute so far... in a dark and twisted kyo kind of way haha. but really.. you were just getting to the point where they'd get together and kidnap totchi away... sad to leave it there!

Your writing style is fine, here! haha. And maybe since you've been perfecting it with Room 304 (which i love, btw), you'll feel more confident about picking up this story again, yes? *nudge nudge*

it'd be aaaawesome if you updated. really. haha. :)

Re: update...?

[diru69]

aw thanks *sniffle* lol
yeah I'll write an update once I get a good
idea for chap 12 :) so... woot!