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{fic} Oneshot: VERSE. (part4)

Jul 15, 2009 01:45

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pinkeuphoria1 July 14 2009, 18:53:39 UTC

Oh I totally loved this ♥ So much tension between those two, not-so-well-hidden secrets, dense Hayato... there were lots and lots of other such things that I liked, details that piled up and made my enjoyment grow. There's nothing better than a well-written Hayaryu story ♥ Great job~

kynseidk July 15 2009, 02:53:51 UTC

GAHHHH. Thank you. I wanted to give up on finishing this a few times. But there were a few scenes that just kept replaying in my head I had to write them.

I really just wanted Ryu to be the one to say the three magic words first.

akillarian July 14 2009, 19:29:38 UTC

Very nice short story. Great that I can read all of them in one go. I enjoy it from beginning to end. Hayato should figure it out by now whose eyes are always watching him. Ryu must be superman, able to study, go to school and watch Hayato.

kynseidk July 15 2009, 02:55:14 UTC

Thank you for reading.

Ryu is--well I can't really say he went to school 100% of the time in college. He's a good kid, but we all skip sometimes (i'm the total example right naoooooo)

akillarian July 15 2009, 03:30:35 UTC

He's good at studying then when he studies :) Funny, I was at school when I wrote comment.

kynseidk July 15 2009, 14:01:01 UTC

i almost skipped school because i wrote this. fandom is killing me gahhhh.

kiki_chan94 July 15 2009, 00:30:09 UTC

puh~ finally finished... it really was long.. BUT TOTALLY WORTH IT!
I sooooo ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ it
the hospital scene made my heart go all doki doki
and at the scene at the restaurants with the ring s I really had to calm myself down ( I almost went al kyaaa~ and it's 2:30 AM here...xD)

kynseidk July 15 2009, 02:57:27 UTC

thanksssssss. <3333

it was long, wasn't it? stupid lj-cut made my life so hard i spent two hours posting this on my site

i'm not good with all the dialogues that are supposed to be mushy/angsty/wtvr, so i'm really glad you liked the confrontation at the hospital.

and the ring and Mini--i actually like Mini (the real girl, from HSHMM), she's a cute character.

silvertwinster July 15 2009, 08:10:12 UTC

gah ♥♥♥ I don't know what else to say so have a few more ♥♥♥♥♥♥

kynseidk July 15 2009, 14:01:31 UTC

heeeee thankyouthankyouu

mae0513 July 15 2009, 08:20:43 UTC

wowwwwww i love it i miss hayato and ryu !!!!!!^O^V

kynseidk July 15 2009, 14:03:15 UTC

they reaaaaaally need some loving.

it's not that i'm against other drama reincarnation pairings of jin and kazu, but there's something about Gokusen2. have you watched the last fight before graduation? the one where ryu almost gets piped by Kudo and Hayato is all---- mushhhhhhh hahaha.

hee sorry for my flail.

mae0513 July 15 2009, 14:43:21 UTC

no its okay i love that scene to im Gokusen2 addic i watch it 100 time!!!