i don't know...i think i loved this too much xx" there was so much underlying tension and just the right amount of awkward. it's a very well-written piece of work :) <3 and the ending is just lovely.
It's probably because Hayato's too used to them being together and too used to caring for Ryu in a special way that he didn't realize it until Ryu started to avoid him.
And Ryu's not the most touchy-feely guy as well, so he's really horrible at making people understand him--thingy.
But that's why Take exists, haha Ryu becomes a little of a softie when dealing with Take,, :)
I really really enjoyed this, a lovely look at the relationship between Hayato and Ryu and how their friendship bond can and will and should develop into something more. My heart ached for Ryu who was obviously in love, cared so much, hurt so much and was too scared and too caught in his own uncertainty to do something. And Hayato was so blind, but was also hurting and wanting to have Ryu there with him and so hurt and confused as to why he was not. The conversation with Take and Hyugga were fabulous in showing that.
And I loved the way you brought the other boys in, gave them purpose and lives of their own, but still showed that they cared and supported both hayato and ryu.
Beautifully written, and thanks for posting this all in one go! Although it kinda makes me sad that there is not more to look forward to, but it was lovely to have a good long fic to sink my teeth into. Great job, I loved it!
HayaRyu for me is a favorite pairing that's separate from AkaKame, just because their aura creates something new altogether. I've always kind of thought that HayaRyu were a split of Sawada Shin's persona: the violent part is Hayato and the silent, brooding part is Ryu. It's a challenge to make a story that combines the characters.
I likelike Take. he's an adorable munchkin. And the conversation with Hyuuga was rather-- unexpected? I also got a bit surprised I wrote that (it's weird most HayaRyu fics forget about Tsuchi and Hyuuga).
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Your Ryu characterisation was really good.
Thank you for sharing! ♥
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for me Ryu's not the whiny girl (well neither is Hayato), he's just really not expressive. or something.
he's not girly. X_X
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there was so much underlying tension and just the right amount of awkward. it's a very well-written piece of work :) <3
and the ending is just lovely.
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thank you so much for that comment! i was going for many awkward/ambiguous situations, just because the pairing is a very complicated one to write.
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Something unusual in that it took Hayato so long to figure it out. Then again Hayato is not really that bright isn't he?
But Ryu is just as bad in giving signs. All that hiding of his love just made him love sick and almost ruined their friendship.
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It's probably because Hayato's too used to them being together and too used to caring for Ryu in a special way that he didn't realize it until Ryu started to avoid him.
And Ryu's not the most touchy-feely guy as well, so he's really horrible at making people understand him--thingy.
But that's why Take exists, haha Ryu becomes a little of a softie when dealing with Take,, :)
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And I loved the way you brought the other boys in, gave them purpose and lives of their own, but still showed that they cared and supported both hayato and ryu.
Beautifully written, and thanks for posting this all in one go! Although it kinda makes me sad that there is not more to look forward to, but it was lovely to have a good long fic to sink my teeth into. Great job, I loved it!
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HayaRyu for me is a favorite pairing that's separate from AkaKame, just because their aura creates something new altogether. I've always kind of thought that HayaRyu were a split of Sawada Shin's persona: the violent part is Hayato and the silent, brooding part is Ryu. It's a challenge to make a story that combines the characters.
I likelike Take. he's an adorable munchkin. And the conversation with Hyuuga was rather-- unexpected? I also got a bit surprised I wrote that (it's weird most HayaRyu fics forget about Tsuchi and Hyuuga).
THANKYOU!!!
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he's so cute~ showing their marriage bands and all the jealousy induced anger... XDDD
in your face Mini! >)
why is yabuki so dense?! why?! OTZ
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i love this! <3
smex please? =D
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