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kymley

True Love 4/4

Apr 02, 2013 21:03

True Love - 4/4

By Kymley
About: Who else but Kevin and Scotty.
Rate: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just messing with the characters if B&S
Summary: Scotty asks for forgiveness but is it really that easy?

Written for Love Bingo
Prompt - Heavenly Love
Word Court - 860

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scotty, love bingo, kevin, true love - series

Comments 15

marea67 April 2 2013, 20:09:56 UTC

What a sad, but beautiful ending. I'm glad that they still had so much joy and love and family in their life-time though. Thanks for writing this. :)

kymley April 3 2013, 18:03:23 UTC

I'm glad you liked it - I was worried about the response to the ending but they had a good life together.

Thanks for reading and commenting :) Though how you've managed to keep this up every week with the series I'll never know, well done!

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kymley April 3 2013, 18:04:52 UTC

Thanks - that was the plan, so mission accomplished :)

Thanks for reading!

laira26 April 2 2013, 20:53:20 UTC

wow! Wasn't expecting that... I've just read the wonderful chapter 3, so romantic and wonderful, and now! you killed Kevin and gives Scotty a terminal illness. OMG :(
It's brilliantly written, very powerful and shocking. Very well done. I'm still shivering but I loved that they have such a wonderful life with 4 kids.
Thank you for writing :)

kymley April 3 2013, 18:09:16 UTC

Yeah, I'm sorry about that...I made it seem to everything was going to be great and them bam. Though I never know what is going to really happen until I start writing... though I did know this ending when I was posting. Though I was always going to let them have their family.

Thanks for the comments, you make me blush.

Thanks for reading :)

scout_harper April 2 2013, 21:46:40 UTC

Since Scotty will soon join his beloved,I am okay with it.The story was beautiful.Thank you for showing that they had a full life with kids.Loved all the glimpses of their life together.
Thank you for writing this wonderful series.

kymley April 3 2013, 18:13:10 UTC

Well in my mind Kevin knew that Scotty would die so his mind/body gave up; sooner rather than later. Glad you liked them - I thought they might be a bit short in places but I only wanted them to paint a picture of what they had together.

Thanks :)

Thanks for commenting :)

samrunning April 3 2013, 00:05:45 UTC

"I'll see you soon, sweetie." Probably the most romantic line ever.

Kevin once said he wanted to go first, and you let him. You gave them a beautiful, full life and let them leave it together. I (almost) forgive you for letting them go. ;) Great job. I hope this means you will keep writing.

kymley April 3 2013, 18:16:01 UTC

Aww, thank you :)

When did he say that? I don't quite remember that?

Haha, I gave them a lovely life and everyone has to leave at some point, right?

Well, we will see ;)

Thanks for commenting