White chocolate vs Dark chocolate - chapter 3

[kuroyukisama_17]

Title: White chocolate vs Dark chocolate

Author: kuroyukisama_17

Pairing: Hikaru X Daiki | Inoo x Daiki | Daiki x OC

Genre: AU, BL, fluff, slight angst

Rating: PG-13

Comments

[jyj4everfan]

This makes me curious if Hikaru actually knows Daiki and why Hikari uses Hikaru's identity when he's with Daiki. I feel like Hikari is hiding something.

It must be shocking for Inoo to see Hikaru's twin lol but then Yuya already mentioned Hikari to him though even before he met Hikari haha. I guess he was too shocked with what Yuya told him (after Yuya mentioned Hikari) so he forgot about it XD
If it's already too shocking for Inoo, what more if Daiki finds out about it. I hope he will not ignore Hikaru if ever he finds out that Hikaru is not the person he's looking for >< And I hope he will not get hurt from it.

And aww when Hikaru smiled at Daiki at the end of the chapter :3 How sweet <3 Daiki must be so happy to see that haha :D

Thanks for the update! :)

[kuroyukisama_17]

yep, Inoo is shocked to know that Hikaru have a twins... well, when Yuya mention Hikari, that time Inoo is still clueless about the twins.

this story will have a lot of twist especially between the twins;

thanks for reading and commenting ^^/

[juju905rote]

Inoo seems so confused in this chapter about Hikaru/Hikari XD
Btw InooDai friendship is so cute, Inoo is so concerned about Daichan ;;

I think the white chocolate & dark chocolate in the title refers to Hikaru & Hikari (but I'm not sure which is which).

When Daiki finds out about Hikari, I wonder which one he'll choose? Even tho it was Hikaru he met and fell for, I think he'll also fall for Hikaru. Well these are just my wild guesses.

I love the last part when Hikaru smiled at Daiki ;; It seems like Hikaru is growing feelings for him already.

Take care of your real life first, Yuuki, and just write whatever fics that you can write ^^

[kuroyukisama_17]

well, the spot is on InooDai in this story... though that the main pairing was HikaDai, I just love seeing Inoo with Daiki... can't help it~

and yup, White chocolate & Dark chocolate refer to Hikaru and Hikari... good job figuring it out; I thought no one would notice that. but the White is Hikaru and the Dark is Hikari...

yep, now... my fan-fiction folder is filled with HikaNoo and TakaNoo;

thanks for reading and commenting! ^^/

[juju905rote]

I don't mind at all if there is InooDai! ^^ I love to see them together too ;;

Oh! I thought it was the other way around -- I thought Hikaru was dark chocolate and Hikari is white...cus Hikari seems cheerful and Hikaru was being cold to Daiki :D
But this is interesting too...it makes me think there is something hiding behind Hikari's bright demeanor.

Well Inoo is my ichiban and I love fanfics about him :)