1. 10/10 An extremely nice and subtle way of building the whole fanfic around that by developing Fye's feelings and making parallels with about every notable Parent/Child relationship of the manga. But subtly so. 2. 7/10 There was some fluff. But sometimes you can feel more the smutsmutsmutsmut 3. 8/10 Eeeeh, this was… confusing. Very much so. I'm not sure if this fanfic is nonsense and leads nowhere or if it's pure genious. I had a very hard time chosing the score I would give you. I swear, at some times during the fanfic I thought this was worth a 4/10 and at others an 11/10. I'm very much confused, but in the end I think I see (partly) what you did there and it's well-played. Final score: 8/10
Special mention to the hilarious lines, as well. I saved at least two for posterity: “I have a cockache, too.” "I have plenty of shame," Fay assured him, "And now she does, too."
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2. 7/10 There was some fluff. But sometimes you can feel more the smutsmutsmutsmut
3. 8/10 Eeeeh, this was… confusing. Very much so. I'm not sure if this fanfic is nonsense and leads nowhere or if it's pure genious. I had a very hard time chosing the score I would give you. I swear, at some times during the fanfic I thought this was worth a 4/10 and at others an 11/10. I'm very much confused, but in the end I think I see (partly) what you did there and it's well-played.
Final score: 8/10
Special mention to the hilarious lines, as well. I saved at least two for posterity:
“I have a cockache, too.”
"I have plenty of shame," Fay assured him, "And now she does, too."
*thumbs up*
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2. How Fluffy was this fic? 9
3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 10
average score: 10
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2. How Fluffy was this fic? 9
3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 7
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