I've always liked pairings that have a bit of a spark, of conflict between them, and that's an aspect of Kurogane and Fai's relationship you really highlight here. :)
That their constant fighting is the outward appearance of the their tender words, that the arguing is a aspect of even their intimate moments and how you portray it is not so much funny, but it does have a warm feeling. Like their craving for each other it is them and somehow it isn't crude or rough, but subtle and beautiful.
This is WONDERFUL. I love how you use hunger to define their relationship entirely; what a great way to fill the prompt. But it's the setting that really made this fic work. I love the way you set the scene in the snow, in the cold, and talk about their arguments in these sharp ways - and then everything you're saying is warm and wonderful. It's like looking at snow out the window while warming your hands by a fire. Somehow, this whole fic has that peaceful, happy feeling to it. I love it.
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Of course they argue about everything, of course they do, and it's so them :D And and and just <3
(Apologies for lack of coherency, it is far too early in the morning where I am, lol.)
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2. How Fluffy was this fic? 10
3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 10
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