"Addicting Innocence", oneshot, RukixReita
Title: "Addicting Innocence"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: lemon, AU, vampire
Warnings: handjob, grinding
Rating: R
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: RukixReita
Synopsis: I don’t know what it was that drew me to him. Maybe it was his humanity… fragility… or just the simple innocence that glowed from him.
Disclaimers: sleeping ( Read more... )
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: lemon, AU, vampire
Warnings: handjob, grinding
Rating: R
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: RukixReita
Synopsis: I don’t know what it was that drew me to him. Maybe it was his humanity… fragility… or just the simple innocence that glowed from him.
Disclaimers: sleeping ( Read more... )
Comments 29
and omg you stole my idea O__O last night i was thinking of writing a fic about .. vampire uru~!! i swear we have the same mind haha. XD
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haha :D what a coinsidence :P
But hey, thanks for reading me again^_^
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lol of course i've read it, ur my number 1 writer~
i read all your FF's. xD *fangirls herself* YAY
omg now i sound really stupid or something. haha XD
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No, haha, you don't sound stupid at all xD I'm flattered you like my fikkus so much :33 makes me really happy, you know^_^
Afterall, that's what I hope for; people to like my writings, hih^^"
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not really a fan of vampire stories (they tend to be tacky) but this worked well :D
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I don't usually read many vampire fikkus either.. even though I love vampires O.o funny thing xD
But ne, thank you for reading^_^
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The vampire was Reita right? Right? XD
I don't know, I'm a bit annoyed of vampire stories, but yours was better as the usual vampire things I've read so far^^ But still, I guess it was not exactly my taste. Nice anyway.
Btw. do you have a Beta reader? XD
I don't mean it bitchy, maybe I just understood several parts like
“Come for me”, he breathe out, kissing his neck. oO
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Ah, thank you~ :o I rarely read vampire stories myself these days to be honest although I love vampires and so O.o I don't know why's that. Maybe they all feel the same *shrug* Not saying that mine wouldn't fit to that pit, haha xD
Oh shiiiiiit~! I've never been this careless when it comes to grammar and such O_o I checked the story in such a hurry before posting it that it was loaded with mistakes it seems x'DD But I think they've been taken care of now^^"" Thank you so much for pointing those out o_o! *ashamed >_>;*
So as to your question, no I don't have a beta :'D I like to write and post the fics right when they're finished so... I just should start being more careful =_=
Anyway~ thank you so much for reading once again even if it wasn't really your cup of tea!^_^
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Oh don't be ashamed, it can always happen, especially when you're in a hurry and excited and so on^^ I was not sure if I should tell you, cause it's a bit rude and so on >_>;
If you like, I can correct them^^ Though I know that my English is not best, but I guess there would be a few things that I see earlier than you as it's not my story. And then I would read each of your stories, that would be good for me! XD
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Yea, I suppose^^" But no, it was definitely good that you told me! I appreciate it :3
omg, you'd become my beta? o.o that'd be awesome, honestly. Since it's a real pain to read my stories afterwards, finding so many mistakes on the way >_<; so~ if you'd really be willing to check them for me, I'd be grateful :3
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Great work^^
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Thank you for reading^^
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Nyaa, I'm glad you liked~^_^ *giggle* oh, silly girl, you should get rest if so sleepy, hihi.
Ne, thank you for reading hun *glomps*
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