"Addicting Innocence", oneshot, RukixReita

[kuroi_fuyu]

Title: "Addicting Innocence"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: lemon, AU, vampire
Warnings: handjob, grinding
Rating: R
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: RukixReita
Synopsis: I don’t know what it was that drew me to him. Maybe it was his humanity… fragility… or just the simple innocence that glowed from him.
Disclaimers: sleeping

Comments

[vanilla69]

Woah *_* This one is nice too~
The vampire was Reita right? Right? XD
I don't know, I'm a bit annoyed of vampire stories, but yours was better as the usual vampire things I've read so far^^ But still, I guess it was not exactly my taste. Nice anyway.

Btw. do you have a Beta reader? XD
I don't mean it bitchy, maybe I just understood several parts like
“Come for me”, he breathe out, kissing his neck. oO

[kuroi_fuyu]

The vampire was actually Ruki :D since he's the seme in my claim so there's no other option than Rei being the virgin^_~ though I suppose I should've put "Ruki's POV" in the description earlier >_>;
Ah, thank you~ :o I rarely read vampire stories myself these days to be honest although I love vampires and so O.o I don't know why's that. Maybe they all feel the same *shrug* Not saying that mine wouldn't fit to that pit, haha xD
Oh shiiiiiit~! I've never been this careless when it comes to grammar and such O_o I checked the story in such a hurry before posting it that it was loaded with mistakes it seems x'DD But I think they've been taken care of now^^"" Thank you so much for pointing those out o_o! *ashamed >_>;*
So as to your question, no I don't have a beta :'D I like to write and post the fics right when they're finished so... I just should start being more careful =_=
Anyway~ thank you so much for reading once again even if it wasn't really your cup of tea!^_^

[vanilla69]

Yeah, I was confused, as for me, Ruki is seme as well (at least in your stories and I'm SO thankful for it!) so this came strange. Anyway, now I have again a different view on it :3

Oh don't be ashamed, it can always happen, especially when you're in a hurry and excited and so on^^ I was not sure if I should tell you, cause it's a bit rude and so on >_>;
If you like, I can correct them^^ Though I know that my English is not best, but I guess there would be a few things that I see earlier than you as it's not my story. And then I would read each of your stories, that would be good for me! XD

[kuroi_fuyu]

The details are always so clear in my mind that I forget the readers can't possibly know my every thought xD
Yea, I suppose^^" But no, it was definitely good that you told me! I appreciate it :3
omg, you'd become my beta? o.o that'd be awesome, honestly. Since it's a real pain to read my stories afterwards, finding so many mistakes on the way >_<; so~ if you'd really be willing to check them for me, I'd be grateful :3

[vanilla69]

You do? Okay, now I'm relieved ^^
Sure I would ^__^ I would love to! The thought that I'm the first one who reads it makes me kind of horny >DDD
But keep in mind that I might take one or maybe even two days to read it through and my English isn't the very best, but apart from that, I would try to be the best beta you can have ♥

[kuroi_fuyu]

*chuckle* xD Oh, that is completely understandable :) I wasn't expecting to get them checked right away^^
Well, it is settled then ne?^_^ shall I be sending the stuff to your email? :o

[vanilla69]

Alright then^^
Yeah, it is I would say.
Sure ^^ It's given in my profile~

[kuroi_fuyu]

Okay^_^
Thank you once again ♥~

[vanilla69]

No no, I thank you, really^^
I love your stories!

[kuroi_fuyu]

I'm flattered, thank you~^_^"