Comments | kuonji14: SG-1 Fic: All Over But The Crying, by kuonji (NC-17)

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SG-1 Fic: All Over But The Crying, by kuonji (NC-17)

Jun 11, 2007 22:57

Title: All Over But The Crying (sequel to Closeted and ...Waiting 00:00:00)
Author: kuonji
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Characters: Jack O'Neill, Daniel Jackson, George Hammond, McKenzie, Teal'c, Janet Frasier, Samantha Carter
Pairings: Daniel/Jack
Category: dark, angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: non-con, italics!
Spoilers: vague for Need
Words: ~9160
Summary: ( Read more... )

type: fanfic, series: closeted, fandom: sg-1, slash?: yes

Comments 38

saladscream June 12 2007, 14:39:44 UTC

YAY!!!!
My dear, I officially love you.
That was f'ing brilliant.
Loved the format you chose; it's so fitting. Upside down and inside out - just like Jack's psyche.
And poor Jack, still so helplessly (and hopelessly?) in love. I'd love to know how Daniel feels about the whole ordeal, about Jack... ::hint-hint::
But whether you decide to write a fourth part or not, the whole series (as it is) is fantastic. You excel at writing creepy!Jack and coping!Daniel. ::beams::
I hope you'll write many, many more stories like that. You made my week! :o))

kuonji14 June 12 2007, 18:32:41 UTC

Oh wow, you totally win! First post, and before I've even posted to communities! :D (Cute icon, by the way!)

I'm so glad you liked the format. I wanted the slow reveal of Jack's Evolution Into Evil!(TM), and I liked the fall backwards to 'normal' that I could coincide with the story in the present. Also, you know, I just thought it'd be cool. ;P

Yes, Jack is still in love. It's not hopeless, I hope. If it were real life, probably, but these are guys who go through 44min of trauma every week and laugh it off! :) Not that the proper amount of angst isn't required of course. The fourth story was/is indeed about Daniel. It rounds off their relationship a little bit better. Perhaps after I've read somethings fluffy and happy, I'll come back to this universe. o_O

Thanks so much for lovely comments. :)

(By the way, when I hit a block, I found this thoroughly inspiring, thanks. *G!)

saladscream June 12 2007, 20:03:34 UTC

Oh wow, you totally win! First post, and before I've even posted to communities! :D (Cute icon, by the way!)

Oh uhm... pure coincidence, y' know... ::clears throat:: ...Not like I was avidly searching my friends page every day in the hopes of finding this. ;op
And the icon is home-made! ::beams::

I'm so glad you liked the format. I wanted the slow reveal of Jack's Evolution Into Evil!(TM), and I liked the fall backwards to 'normal' that I could coincide with the story in the present. Also, you know, I just thought it'd be cool. ;P

It so is. It's perfectly disquieting and unbalancing.

Perhaps after I've read somethings fluffy and happy, I'll come back to this universe. o_O

Heh! I can imagine. You need to recharge the batteries with cute and fluffy in order to delve back into trauma. ;o))

Thanks so much for lovely comments. :)

You're very welcome, hon. Thank YOU for the wonderful read. ::bg::

(By the way, when I hit a block, I found this thoroughly inspiring, thanks. *G!)Bwahahahaaa! You perv! I can see how that would've ( ... )

kuonji14 June 14 2007, 04:48:15 UTC

Hiya, a really random question here... I came across a manip a few days ago, called 'Centerfold'. It was of a nude Daniel lying sideways looking at a (presumably) sexy magazine, and the image was cleverly edited with 'fold marks' to look like a centerfold itself. I've since been unable to find it again. Being that you're 'in the business', might you have chanced across this manip and remember where it is? !_!

Thread 8

melayneseahawk June 13 2007, 03:56:25 UTC

!!! *loves*

I think we need one last one, to determine what happens with the Jack/Daniel side, but that's only because I hate loose ends.

kuonji14 June 14 2007, 04:14:21 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I appreciate your opinion and love. :D

tresa_cho June 15 2007, 06:16:27 UTC

I second this motion. *pounds gavel*

kuonji14 June 15 2007, 07:25:10 UTC

;P Your vote has been counted.

gaidheil1974 June 13 2007, 12:39:32 UTC

This has been lovely. I keep my eye out for a couple of other WIPs, but I was highly anticipating this one. I just HAD to know what happened! I think I agree with those who said that something from Danil'e POV and a bit of happy ending would be awesome. I just question the "happy ending" bit given all that happened.

kuonji14 June 14 2007, 04:18:12 UTC

... I was highly anticipating this one

Oh, that's very flattering! I hope it was worth the wait. I tried to explain enough about what happened to Jack without ruining whatever you guys may have built up in your imaginations. ;)

Happy? Well, how about a hopeful ending then... :)

dhae_knight June 14 2007, 11:11:59 UTC

This series is awesome!

When I read part 1 I wasn't very fond of it, it was too creepy and scary.

Then came part 2, and it was still way creepy, but sad and claustrophobic too.

And now this, where the creepyness goes away, but it's so sad, and kinda hopeless - at least for poor Jack.

So, yeah, I'm just going to join the chorus for a part 4, where Daniel gets his thinky thing on and fixes everything ;-)

Oh, and I love the format entirely. The whole counter-progression is brilliant. And all this because of a thing that saved Jack's life... any connection with the sarcophagus-thing?

kuonji14 June 15 2007, 07:24:40 UTC

Thanks for continuing to read after the first part creeped you. :D (Though I admit I'm glad that you found it so, hehe.) Wow, "sad and claustrophobic" is a great description of "Waiting"; I really like that, thanks. Part three I was aiming for hopeful, which is why I figured a fourth part wasn't strictly necessary, heh. But you're right; it still leaves you a little sad. Poor Jack does guilt too well.

part 4, where Daniel gets his thinky thing on and fixes everythingHa! What a description! :) Daniel has his hands full at the moment, being traumatized, guilty, and mad as hell. But I'm sure in time he'll fit it into his schedule to (over)think things over and try to force Jack to stop being a paranoid ass. :D ( ... )

dhae_knight June 15 2007, 16:49:14 UTC

Heh - I win! :-D

It is hopeful - it's just also very sad, because it's so easy to imagine Jack running himself into the ground with his guilt.

And I'm (shh... don't want to interfere in your ideas) thinking that Daniel was already getting his thinky thing on, and figuring out that Jack was feeling so guilty he'd quit. And making Jack's staying at SGC a part of his 'punishment', was Daniel's way of trying to save him.

Because, sure, Daniel has issues (lots of them), but you're absolutely right, even after this (hell, even during this), Jack is still the most important person in Daniel's world. And Daniel's very aware that Jack would die a slow death (metaphorically, if not in actuality) if he got to stay at home with nothing but his guilt for company.

kuonji14 June 17 2007, 07:20:51 UTC

Sorry! Remodeling going on over here, erk. Very cool comments, will reply more coherantly when not exhausted and asleep on my feet. :P

Thread 5

inthe_parlance June 14 2007, 21:14:22 UTC

I really loved this story as a whole and especially the way the last part was written. I know Daniel went through hell but I feel much more sorry for Jack. He loved Daniel all this time and kept it to himself, and this...thing...whatever it was that happened to him (an alien device, drug?) took what was very beautiful and loving and twisted it to something violent and horrible! Poor, poor Jack! And I wonder if Sam, Teal'c and all (other than the medical people) realized that he raped Daniel; that it was more than the "torturing his friend" that Jack said, and what they saw when they broke into the closet. This was really a fascinating story. On one hand I would certainly like to know what happened next and how Daniel was coping with it all, but I also feel that you ended it at a really satisfying point.

kuonji14 June 15 2007, 07:53:01 UTC

I know Daniel went through hell but I feel much more sorry for Jack.

How very interesting! Personally, I feel for them both about equally. Jack has an amazing amount of guilt, so he's sort of being slow-tortured over a long period of time, whereas Daniel was in pure hell for a concentrated three weeks. Besides, Daniel was abused by his friend whom he trusted. (He trusts Jack so much, in fact, that he feels safer when he thinks about Jack, while being raped by... well, Jack.) Both their situations are compounded by the fact that there is pretty literally no one to blame. It wasn't malicious intent or even properly a mistake that caused this; it was an emergency effort to save Jack's life, one that had unexpected side-effects. So there's no one entity to blame. Now Jack puts the blame on himself, but Daniel is left at odds. Daniel's forgiving people all the time -- Teal'c and Jack and Skaara, Sha're, even Apophis' host. It must be a terrible strain. Both of them have a lot to work out.

I wonder if Sam, Teal'c and all (other than the ( ... )