Title: All Over But The Crying (sequel to
Closeted and
...Waiting 00:00:00)
Author:
kuonjiFandom: Stargate SG-1
Characters: Jack O'Neill, Daniel Jackson, George Hammond, McKenzie, Teal'c, Janet Frasier, Samantha Carter
Pairings: Daniel/Jack
Category: dark, angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: non-con, italics!
Spoilers: vague for Need
Words: ~9160
Summary:
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Amazing.
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I see lots of folks asking for one more chapter - and I think I remember that you dread the idea of writing a "bad" sequel? I certainly wouldn't kick a sequel out of bed for eating crackers *g*, but I'm completely satisfied with the way this story leaves things. The symbolism of the proffered hand is lovely. :-)
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I'd love to read the next part if you do write it, but I think that it does end well as it stands. The offered hand and the note to Jack say everything they need to. Thank you for sharing.
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You captured the personalities perfectly
Oo, nice tingles! Characterization is always the top priority for me. I'm glad they seemed to read well for you even in this whacked-out setting. I'm glad the format worked out well, too, and that you found the ending stand-alone, yay!
The offered hand and the note to Jack say everything they need to.
dhae_knight said above that the note shows that Daniel is already working to find a fix to the situation. Although that hadn't been exactly my intent (I just instinctively thought that it was something Daniel would do), I'm really glad that Daniel's presence was well-felt. Even though this is Jack's story, Daniel does have a lot of influence on him -- now more than ever before. I think if Daniel's careful and a little bit wily, he can use that to mend their relationship. :)
visions of a wierd naked Jack in a silk house coat telling Daniel to 'rub the lotion on it's skin'ohhh, now you've done it. Now I have that stuck in my head as ( ... )
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Good job presenting your ideas and creating atmosphere.
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lol, and yes, the italics really do run backwards, chronologically. I'm glad it was effective for you even without realizing. ;) Thanks for the comment!
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