Week 13: Abandon Hope, All Ye Who Enter Here

[kschlotwrites]

I thought it was just another day at work. Giving tours of the Temporal Lobe to groups of high schoolers, and a little bit of paperwork at the end of the day. Boy, was I wrong

Comments

[rayaso]

This was wonderfully imaginative, from the general concept (tour of a brain) to the details of the bad memories and the tour guide's comments/thoughts. This was great!

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[kehlen]

Wow. I really enjoyed the story, and the allusion to this Idol week was a nice addition :)

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[shadowwolf13]

What an incredible concept!! That poor girl though. :'(

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you! I do feel bad for Host 13. Hopefully she'll make some happy memories!

[mamas_minion]

I love the concept you came up with. I really enjoyed the author and his narrative as well.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[eternal_ot]

Amazing take! I loved the idea and the the execution of it. Brilliant take on the prompt. I also felt bad for host 13. A great read! Kudos! *claps*

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you! Yeah, Host 13 has been through a lot. Hopefully she'll make some happy memories one day.