Week 13: Abandon Hope, All Ye Who Enter Here

[kschlotwrites]

I thought it was just another day at work. Giving tours of the Temporal Lobe to groups of high schoolers, and a little bit of paperwork at the end of the day. Boy, was I wrong

Comments

[dmousey]

Interesting concept. This was a compelling read. Well done. Hugs and peace~~~

[sinnamongirl]

This is so imaginative, I'm impressed!!

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[penpusher]

Really well crafted, and realistic - like more than, say, "Innerspace" or even "Fantastic Voyage!" Just a brilliant concept and both tense and funny in all the right places.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!

[fodschwazzle]

Yeah this is rather great. Ernie is just this side of unlikeable in all of his grudging acceptance of what would be, for most us, an amazing job. Also, holy crap, the "0 days without a fatality" implication is terrifying. And as a High School teacher, everything about the kids was true.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you! I was worried that not really knowing any high school kids, that they wouldn't come off as realistic.

[marlawentmad]

This is a fun thought experiment! Great use of the prompt, it went in  such a unique direction.

[kschlotwrites]

Thank you!