Fic: Observation (Sherlock Holmes, Holmes/Watson/Mary) (WIP)

[krytella]

ETA 3/28: This story is not abandoned. I'm still actively working on it. It will probably be around 7,000 words. It grew a non-sex part in the middle that took a long time to write.

Posting as I go here because sherlockkink part 1 is almost full.
Title: Observation
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes, based on book canon but movie influenced
Rating: NC-17

Comments

[juniper200]

A bit of impropriety behind closed doors, between man and wife only - French style, with the mouth (the better to please the patient wife), a bit of wasted seed deposited somewhere other than the fruitful vine.

It's so...period-appropriate! I love you!

[krytella]

Thank you! I'm realizing how hard it is to write period-appropriate porn that's still in any way hot. I admit I will be using the word "cock" later on in the story. Because I like it. But looking up Victorian slang is fun.

[juniper200]

"Cock" is period-appropriate; it dates back to Chaucer at least.

[mistyzeo]

This is... so sexy. And I love Mary's voice!

[krytella]

Thank you! Poor Mary hardly gets anything, not even mentioned by name anywhere but one book. I'm trying to give her a place in the story in my version, although I think she knows that she doesn't always come first for Watson. And maybe that's okay.

[anonymous]

wow. sexy as 19th century victorian style gets. more of it, please. ;)

[fritti13]

Will there be more of this lovely fic?

[fitofpique]

This is so amazingly well done - and unbelievably hot!