murmurs of the brain

[krwlr]

I feel pooped out from school. I was so close to typing "life" just now, but I like life, and it's hardly possible for me to get pooped out by it, so I decided to keep it specific. By the way, if you see any grammatical, punctuation, or mechanical errors, please point them out; I know my English is far from perfect. (THANK YOU in advance

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[wannaseemygoob]

I take AP english & I am the editor of the school newspaper. Maybe I can give you some tips.

-Make sure not to start sentences with But or and.
-Be careful with your commas. It seems like you might get a little overwhelmed with them sometimes.
-Also be careful of run-on sentences or starting sentences so that they are fragments.

I hope this helps.

xo.
<3b.

[krwlr]

Thank youu :) it does help! and yeah, commas are driving me crazy, run-on sentences too.

xx

[shinodarely]

I can't help too much with the grammer, as I tend to not really watch what i type on here but if you have like homework questions or need to know if something is correct I would be glad to help.

Dont let my grammer and bad spelling on here fool you. *g*

**double hugs* *pets hair*

Have you tried talking to the teacher? Maybe you can get some extra credit work or ask him if he has any suggestions on how to help you improve in his class? *pets Hair some more:

[krwlr]

Aww, thank youu ><

Haha, they won't fool me! :)

Yeah, I have talked to him, maybe I will about some extra credit some other time.

*hugs* hehe

xx

>hug<

[the_on_switch]

hey stranger.

i friended you. hope you don't mind.

feel free to reciprocate.

ciao

Re: >hug<

[krwlr]

hey

haha, course i dont mind!

i'll get right on to reciprocating.

xx