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moirariordan in kradam_kiss

fic: he rings my bell (2/2)

Jul 03, 2010 01:38

he rings my bell (2/2)
part one

( I miss your stupid jokes, tell me a stupid joke so I can pretend you’re here. )

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revlisacat July 3 2010, 07:17:55 UTC

Awwwww...this was lovely. You have the "awkward, young and in love" conversation style down really well. I especially liked the end, when everybody was looking through the window at them--Kris really is oblivious, isn't he? LOL.

risti July 3 2010, 07:23:51 UTC

Aww, I liked this! It's different from most of the HS/College AU's out there, and it's very real feeling.

(I'd kind of like to know what happens next, though... any chance of that happening?)

elizaria July 3 2010, 07:30:49 UTC

Whee! Happy fic. *curls up in it* Just about to go to work & this was a great way to start the day along w coffee :)

bubby_wubby July 3 2010, 07:54:19 UTC

I
HAVE
NO
WORDS

Like really...wow. &hearts

dansetheblues July 3 2010, 07:58:12 UTC

Can I just say how much I love this line?
Kris’s mom pokes her head in. “Guys,” she says sharply, “you are aware that this room is not soundproof?”
Because really, isn't what real life is all about - paper thin walls and everybody listening?

Best High School Au ever-I love everything about this from beginning to end, but you kind of knew that already, didn't you?
And IA that you need another verse in this world sometime really soon.
Never stop doing this, bb. <333