fic: he rings my bell (2/2)

[moirariordan]

he rings my bell (2/2)
part one

Comments

[llaras]

What a great read! I have a huge grin on my face from reading this!

[oatmeal_cookie]

OMG make me cry, why don't you. /flashbacks to my screwy 16-year-old self

This is so, so, so lovely. They're both so in love, and so adorably earnest about it, a lot innocent too, yet very adult about their issues, especially in the conversation at the end. How Kris felt, their hilarious banter, every word that came out of Adam's mouth - it all felt very, very real.

You combined two of my favorite things - high school/college AUs (srsly they're like crack to me) and an established relationship! I love stories that deal with issues post-getting together. Insecure-but-not-obnoxiously-so!Kris along with reassuring-and-sweet!Adam (with bonus sassy!Megan and supportive!Cale) and your great writing just legit made my day. So thank you. :D

[kairi_01]

I liked this! OOC for Adam and Kris, but still a nice story. That rambly style really worked well; it gave me a good feel for your Kris' personality. Nice job!

[diane_mckay]

awesome. Wonderful Kris pov.

[midasu]

I love this. It felt really real. Everything was really well fleshed out and nicely done. I also love that all the drama was in everyones head, because that is so how high school is.