fic: Resolution (part 2)

[xrajahx]

Title: Resolution
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Summary: (part 2) Something terrible and unthinkable has happened. Kris risks his life to save Adam; will they both make it out okay? And what about Allison? Will the wounds of the fight prove stronger and deeper than any or of their cuts or bruises?

Link to Part 1: Read more... )

Comments

[equus07]

Umm. Wow.
I dont know what to say. Just like, dont apologize for this. I mean, your writing is fluid and intense. The plot is dramatic and terrifying but so so good.
Im not worried. Some serious physical, mental and emotional mending is gonna have to take place before things are okay. I have all the confidence that they will be okay eventually.

Gotta shake it off.
♥

[greenskribbles]

omg you had me crying... the last part was so intense just... wow... more please. Your writing is so fluid and I'm in awe of your plot and developement. You are amazing.

[4cap]

Please continue. Thank you for contributing this.

[colourfuldaze]

okay so, if i wasn't on the phone right now,
i'd totally be bawling.

KRISSSS! :(

[xrajahx]

You guys really make me blush, you know that? ;) Thank you so much!

[tinymich]

Aw, thank you for this fic!

One jarring thing that I had to point out to you -- you mentioned that Adam was wearing leather. Leather doesn't burn. (one link -- see google for more.) That's partly why motorcyclists wear leather pants & jackets; if they crash, and there's a fire, they won't go up in flames.

If you ever go back and rewrite it, you might want to have Adam in, say, a hoodie for night time? I'd suggest a superfabulous satin jacket, but NO ONE wears those at night :-)

[tinymich]

(and of course I wasn't clear -- of course leather "burns", it's skin and skin can burn -- and of course you can brand cows. What I meant was that it doesn't catch on fire & go up in flames, which is what you mention Adam's jacket doing, kindling to life. and now I'll stop talking!)