fic: Resolution (part 2)

Jun 10, 2009 11:00

Title: Resolution
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Summary: (part 2) Something terrible and unthinkable has happened. Kris risks his life to save Adam; will they both make it out okay? And what about Allison? Will the wounds of the fight prove stronger and deeper than any or of their cuts or bruises?

Link to Part 1: Read more... )

author: xrajahx, rating: pg-13

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nightyu June 10 2009, 16:32:20 UTC
Evil...............
No way~~~~~
Poor Kris...........I don't know what to said.
I just hope they will be happy....
Is that really hard .....

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windandcoffee June 10 2009, 17:39:18 UTC
oh god this is killing meeeee :(

make them better *sigh*

great chapter! i'm hooked! :)

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embaka June 10 2009, 18:06:25 UTC
i am crying tears streaming down my face ok get ahold of myself enough to tell how wonderful your writing please don't make us wait to long

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emmuzka June 10 2009, 18:13:33 UTC
Burn victim Adam! ouch ouch ouch! I actually liked this chapter alot. :)

And by the way, for realism sake: In real life, don't try to peel off clothing from a burn victim if the clothing is not on fire! You might end up peeling the victim's *skin* with it! Instead wrap the victim in clean sheets, first aid blanket, anything to prevent dehydration.

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elizabethfaye09 June 10 2009, 18:41:43 UTC
but...but...make them HAPPY! and make adam better! please? this is making me sad. very, very sad. but it's really really good. i love it.

more soon? :)

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xrajahx June 10 2009, 18:57:11 UTC
I know! It's no fun when they're sad and hurt! That's why i gotta keep writing for the sake of fixing things!

Thanks for all the comments.

And about burn victims - I wasn't sure Kris had any medical expertise and that's why I didn't make him do all that much about it, I tried to make him cautious. I was concerned that if I made him get too involved, he'd actually do something that in real life wouldn't help at all. Thanks for pointing that out to me - and I'm glad that Adam's not hurt too badly or Kris might've just made it worse. *sigh of relief*

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