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Round 15: Atomic Skies

Jun 04, 2013 15:11

Title: Atomic Skies
Team: Future
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Kibum/Donghae, Hangeng/Heechul
Summary: Donghae wakes up one day to find Kibum gone â in the next room, Heechul wakes up to find Hangeng gone.
Prompt Used: JYJ - In Heaven

( Donghae rubs at his eyes and cracks the joint of his left knee before he straightens and fumbles for the curtains. )

!fic post, cycle: 2013, , team future, fandom: super junior

Comments 2

verocity June 8 2013, 16:19:41 UTC

...

I don't think that's how amnesia or a schizophrenic break from reality works. Also, I kept thinking I was reading AU the whole time, then I remembered this was supposed to be a future fic.

idk, I'm in mixed feelings about the fic. I like the premise very much, and some of the rediscovery/reconnection scenes were interesting, and the sparse writing works for the overall tone, but otherwise I'm not sure how else to react.

mara_ciro June 13 2013, 11:53:03 UTC

I should have known who wrote this based on the writing style. Let me throw rocks at you. :)) (and yeah, I agree with the previous comment... I thought this was AU until I got to the end)