Round 3: If our love ceases to be, that is the end of my world for me

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Title: If our love ceases to be, that is the end of my world for me
Team: Canon/AR
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 5,495
Fandom: 2NE1
Pairing: CL/Bom
Summary: Who started it? Bom couldn’t tell. She didn’t really care. Only that they were kissing, and the tiles were so cold against her legs, but Chaerin was so warm-so fucking warm.
Prompt Used: Come

Comments

[mara_ciro]

I usually don't read 2NE1 fics, but in the spirit of this competition, I am going to read everything I can. I like how you interpreted the prompt and milked it for all it was worth. From the group actually performing the song, to interpreting what it really means. I liked how at first, it seemed to be CL who was missing Bom because of how she couldn't appear with the rest of them. Later on, it was CL doing her own thing, and it was Bom waiting for CL to "come back home." I kind of felt the underlying sexual/romantic/whatever tension there was between them and how they all just let it out when they were together again (after missing each other for so long). I guess that's the feeling the song wants to portray-the pent up longing, yet there's that understanding that "You've got to do what you've got to do"

[On another note, I hardly read girl/girl but I liked this one. Good job]

[darkyulate]

I love the way you portray your characters *_____* From the start to the end, I could feel the emotions of each character and yet their uniqueness from the others. It was amazing and it definitely added to the fic reading experience. I love how you use the song for the band and not a lot of people get that opportunity but that was a nice touch. It really shows how true your genre can be.

All in all, I'm definitely glad I gave rhis a chance. I don't usually read femslash but this was soooooo worth it.