ANONYMOUS KPOP HET WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

[aoza]

ANONYMOUS KPOP HET WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

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[kisoap]

my fic is at hansumdo, but here's my masterlist, if that makes things easier! (though some of my older fics aren't as representative of my writing anymore)

i'm open to anything you have to say about my writing, but i'd love opinions on what i'm doing well and what i'm not doing well on? i'm going through a bit of a writing slump, so any feedback is greatly appreciated!

[kisoap]

I really really adore your writing and do believe I have read almost everything you wrote! I love the way you play with words in your fics, how you can put two words so similar in spelling but very different in definition side by side and create a smooth transition from one idea to another. I also really enjoy the vivid imagery you bring to your work, and how you are able to describe so much with so little.

However, maybe it's because I'm just not the greatest at understanding stories but sometimes your plots can be a little complicated to fully comprehend, although when this happens I often find myself reading your work again until I eventually begin to see the meaning. I think your dialogue has improved a lot since some of your older works, though! But tbh, even if your stories don't have much dialogue in them I still think they're absolutely lovely because of your flawless prose. You're a fantastic writer.

Hope you get over your writing slump soon and always looking forward to your works! :)

[kisoap]

You have the lyrical style and a magical way of weaving plot that few possess. It's almost idyllic, reading your work, because it's so easy to get lost in the stories you create. I would love, however, for you to be more... concrete with your plotlines and build them more steadily. Sometimes you start so slow with it and then suddenly end so quick that a reader's left scratching her/his head and wondering what the hell just happened. I'd also love if you tried your hand on writing a multi-chaptered fic. Could be good practice for you to flesh out a unique plotline.