Star Trek: We Reach Our Apogee Slowly (Part 10b), eventual Kirk/Spock, Spock/Uhura, R

Sep 25, 2009 11:08

Title: We Reach Our Apogee Slowly (Part 10b)
Author: kowaiyoukai
Rating: R
Pairing: eventual like whoa Kirk/Spock (STFU), Spock/Uhura (blame JJ, not me)
Warning(s): Angst, meta, language, attempts at witty banter, overly-important tone, intentionally confusing parts, potentially OOC everybody
Spoilers: Star Trek XI (2009) (a.k.a. Star Trek XI, Star Trek 2009 ( Read more... )

fanfic: star trek, fandom: kirk/spock, fandom: star trek, fanfic: kirk/spock

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LOVE hikally September 25 2009, 15:47:40 UTC
You're BACK!!!!

Loved Spock and his view on Theoretically Possible. :)

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Re: LOVE kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 17:14:47 UTC
Thanks a lot for commenting! YES I AM!! But lack of internet continues to be the bane of my existence. *headdesk*

SPOCK IS LOVE. <3

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Re: LOVE anonpersona December 26 2010, 02:58:44 UTC
Couldn't figure out how to comment, so - here I am ( ... )

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Re: LOVE kowaiyoukai January 3 2011, 23:24:39 UTC
Thanks SO MUCH for commenting! <3

Uh, but wait, what? My fic came up as a Google sugestion? LOL NO WAI. You're shitting me. That is equally awesome and freakily weird.

I haven't been online for about four months, thanks to RL and job and apartment stress. It totally sucks. I hate having to do all this RL bullshit and I really miss fandom. But it's comments like yours that make me feel great when I finally do get online.

At this point, I'm planning on finishing as much as I can before updating. It's just that I have so little free time now. I know it's all excuses, but it's fair excuses. I was unemployed when I wrote this. Now, I'm working 30-40 hours a week (plus a 2 hour commute each day) and writing my original novel. Time is passing me by thanks to RL madness.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I truly appreciate your kind words. This fic means a lot to me to, and I'm really looking forward to getting more of it out there. But until it's ready to go, I don't want to post it. So, please be patient with me! Thanks so much again. ♥

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hdluff4eva September 25 2009, 15:55:37 UTC
APOGEE!!! YAY!!!!!

*Ahem*

Jim was more delusional than Spock had originally thought he was if Spock was even entertaining the idea that he would let Jim stay here alone.

SO MUCH LULZ! I love Spock in this chapter. Well, in this whole fic. Actually... I just love Spock. And here he's so worried and protective and YES!!

In short, you are awesome.

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 17:18:16 UTC
Thanks a lot for commenting! XD

LOL, you actually made me realize that was written wrong. It was SUPPOSED to be: "Jim was more delusional than Spock had originally thought he was if Jim was even entertaining the idea that Spock would let him stay here alone."

THAT'S WHAT I GET FOR HAVING TOO MANY PRONOUNS. *headdesk*

This was a very Spock-centric part, wasn't it? Lots of Spock in this. I was surprised, really.

NO YOU'RE AWESOME. <3

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hdluff4eva September 26 2009, 15:16:48 UTC
Lol, see I didn't even catch that. When I'm not Beta reading, I tend not to see spelling errors, hahaha

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hdluff4eva September 26 2009, 15:27:26 UTC
Or grammatical errors... o.0

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 17:19:38 UTC
Thanks a lot for commenting! \o/

I LOVED IT TOO.

ICON LOVE!! Don't know where it's from, but still... ♥

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 19:51:20 UTC
Dude, that's awesome. She looks really cool. <3

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christycorr September 25 2009, 16:39:50 UTC
OH MY GOD, this is TORTURE. Slow-burning, positively sadistic torture. SPOCK, YOU IDIOT. Aaah! It's like you're trying your darnedest to subvert the huddling-for-warmth trope by killing us with UST. Jesus.

Okay. Ahem.

"I would prefer for you to be out of those clothes," Spock said.

Several seconds passed.

"Oh G-god," Jim said. "I'm d-dead. I'm d-dead and I'm hallu-lucinati-ting."

^ this cracked me up so badly. Oh, Spock, why so clueless?

The bridge idiom! Their theoretically possible scenario! Why on earth is Spock the Second pink? And you changed the order of things-I thought you weren't allowed to do that! *grins*

'I'm a doctor, not a deep-sea diver slash a witty phrase slash Klingon warship repairman slash stereotypical action movie hero!'

*dies*

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 17:38:42 UTC
Thanks a lot for commenting! ♥ MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! *clears throat* I'm sorry, I meant, oh. That's very sad for you. *evil glee ensues*

I enjoy killing people with UST. I DO IT FOR SPORT. *takes out UST shotgun and aims to kill*

Spock is so clueless b/c if he wasn't there would be no story. There is your answer.

I assume Spock the Second is pink b/c it was Jim's turn to go and he thought it'd be funny. WHICH IT IS. XD

YOU LOVE THE DOCTOR LINE. Don't lie about it like that. <3

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christycorr September 25 2009, 18:15:13 UTC
*laughs* Yes, I've noticed! Jesus Christ, girl.

I knooow. I'm just saying. Ack. Damn you, Spock.

It is, it is XD And yes, I do. That was a "*dies laughing*" *dies*, not a "*dies writhing in agony, overdosing on UST*" *dies*, even though it COULD HAVE BEEN. *glowers* You should edit the fic title or something, and add, "(Slowly being the operative word)". Hmph.

I love this fic, you know that. i don't mean a word! ♥ Keep up the escalating UST!

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 19:35:35 UTC
LOL, but it makes us all happy to be inundated with UST. *rolls around in it gluttonously*

I knew you knew. But I said it anyway b/c I knew it wouldn't be helpful at all. XP

LOL, I figured as much. Hey now, I DID put slowly in the title AND eventual before the K/S. What more do people want from me? XD

I do know that. ♥ You liar, you mean every word but you want it all anyway. The UST will be escalated to the point of you ripping your hair out to relieve the pain. LOOK FORWARD TO THAT. \o/

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tasty_boots September 25 2009, 17:21:02 UTC
*FLAIL* I'M NOT SURE WHAT TO TYPE HERE BECAUSE I WAS SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS UPDATE AND THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING AND OHMYGOD THE UST AND HYPOTHERMIA AND AHHHH AND YESSSS AND POOR BONES WHAT IF HE HAS TO PEE AND CUDDLING AND PERFECT FIT AND CAVEALICIOUS AND I WOULD PREFER FOR YOU TO BE OUT OF THOSE CLOTHES AND CHEKOV AND STUPID ROCKS AND DUMB ICE PLANET AND HYPOTHERMIA AND UST AND *FLAIL*

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kowaiyoukai September 25 2009, 19:22:19 UTC
Thanks a lot for commenting! ♥

YAY I'M SO HAPPY YOU LOVED IT I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO ANNOY PEOPLE B/C OF THE WAIT AND NOT MAKING OUT. *headdesk*

But it was all worth it for the freaking out Karl icon. \o/

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