is seohyun having some psychotic problem or something?? keke..i still can't relate her personality in this story.. well, no offense please..not that you wrote it badly.. maybe i need to read it twice or more..keke.. it's well written though..i can feel the emotion running wild from the start..
oh, is this the end of the story? i hope i can read the continuation of this chapter.. like how yonghwa help to cure seohyun's phobia towards men.. keke..just an opinion~~
okay Yuri dear. this is awesome as always. the emotions right from the start is kicking hard on me. I love how you describe manic Seohyun. and with the appearance of Yonghwa, can he be the savior to save our broken Seohyun?
and can I say that this idea of your Heart's Engine' series is BRILLIANT! you write angst so well. keep up Yuri. :))
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keke..i still can't relate her personality in this story..
well, no offense please..not that you wrote it badly..
maybe i need to read it twice or more..keke..
it's well written though..i can feel the emotion running wild from the start..
oh, is this the end of the story?
i hope i can read the continuation of this chapter..
like how yonghwa help to cure seohyun's phobia towards men..
keke..just an opinion~~
anyway, keep up the good work!!! hwaiting!!!!!
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I'm really glad that I managed to write with the right emotion for this piece.
yeah, it's a one shot collection so I'll write other couples too but other emotions in it. I'm happy that you like that part.
thank you for your kind words /bows
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this is awesome as always.
the emotions right from the start is kicking hard on me.
I love how you describe manic Seohyun.
and with the appearance of Yonghwa, can he be the savior to save our broken Seohyun?
and can I say that this idea of your Heart's Engine' series is BRILLIANT!
you write angst so well.
keep up Yuri. :))
<3
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I'm super happy that you like this and really, I thought I was horrible at angst lol
come back Anna TT__TT
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you tempted me to write something,
if only I have more time..
you thought your angst was HORRIBLE?
seriously, you're being super critical to your writing.
you're damn GOOD Yuri.. trust me. :))
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Stop flattering me!
You should write something then, go for it :)
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this is very, very good! :D
the description of her emotion and fear are just WOW!
and this is very new to me..
imagining Seohyun this fragile yet scary..
Thank you so muchh..
i will be waiting for next part of this series.. :)
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I didn't want to portray her as bitchy, sad or innocent so I thought fragile, yet like maniac and a bit innocent would be a bit more interesting - -"
No, thank you for reading and commenting
The next part of the series is not going to be Yongseo but I will work hard on it :)
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This is intense, I love how you wrote Seohyun.
I don't get it but I love the emotion, I hope there's a sequel though :/
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but thank you for your compliment but I don't there's going to be a sequel TT_TT
Sorry~
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