Fear (Heart's Engine Series: 01.)

[coffeeinlove]

Fear; Heart's Engine 01.
       Seohyun/Yonnghwa
Rating: pg-15 - Genre: tragic, angst, hint of romance

Comments

[faisazali]

is seohyun having some psychotic problem or something??
keke..i still can't relate her personality in this story..
well, no offense please..not that you wrote it badly..
maybe i need to read it twice or more..keke..
it's well written though..i can feel the emotion running wild from the start..

oh, is this the end of the story?
i hope i can read the continuation of this chapter..
like how yonghwa help to cure seohyun's phobia towards men..
keke..just an opinion~~

anyway, keep up the good work!!! hwaiting!!!!!

[coffeeinlove]

it's partly that but I know, this is really confusing isn't it? - -"
I'm really glad that I managed to write with the right emotion for this piece.

yeah, it's a one shot collection so I'll write other couples too but other emotions in it. I'm happy that you like that part.

thank you for your kind words /bows

[haeanna]

okay Yuri dear.
this is awesome as always.
the emotions right from the start is kicking hard on me.
I love how you describe manic Seohyun.
and with the appearance of Yonghwa, can he be the savior to save our broken Seohyun?

and can I say that this idea of your Heart's Engine' series is BRILLIANT!
you write angst so well.
keep up Yuri. :))

<3

[coffeeinlove]

aw....anna, I miss you <33333

I'm super happy that you like this and really, I thought I was horrible at angst lol

come back Anna TT__TT

[haeanna]

oh dearie!
you tempted me to write something,
if only I have more time..

you thought your angst was HORRIBLE?
seriously, you're being super critical to your writing.
you're damn GOOD Yuri.. trust me. :))

[coffeeinlove]

You make me want to slap you and hug you at the same time, Anna /whines like a five years old.
Stop flattering me!

You should write something then, go for it :)

[dhiey23]

WOW!
this is very, very good! :D

the description of her emotion and fear are just WOW!
and this is very new to me..
imagining Seohyun this fragile yet scary..

Thank you so muchh..
i will be waiting for next part of this series.. :)

[coffeeinlove]

thank you <3

I didn't want to portray her as bitchy, sad or innocent so I thought fragile, yet like maniac and a bit innocent would be a bit more interesting - -"

No, thank you for reading and commenting
The next part of the series is not going to be Yongseo but I will work hard on it :)

[anonymous]

WOW
This is intense, I love how you wrote Seohyun.
I don't get it but I love the emotion, I hope there's a sequel though :/

[coffeeinlove]

I know, I made it hard to understand right? - -"
but thank you for your compliment but I don't there's going to be a sequel TT_TT

Sorry~