when the door closes

Jan 09, 2011 21:10


when the door closes . 00
pg-13 (jooyeon/g.o, soyeon/seungho)
they've only betrayed each other as much as they've let their hearts betray them.
a/n: one of my first chaptered fics that i'm actually going to work hard on. feedback and ideas would be much appreciated!
you're not mine anymore, and i wonder if you ever were. )

fandom: t-ara, ♥ : soyeon/seungho, fandom: mblaq, ♥ : jooyeon/g.o, Ξ : withoutchange, fandom: after school

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conversefreak16 January 11 2011, 00:02:54 UTC
Ugh, way to leave it at a cliff hanger ;; lol
i love these pairings,, and cant wait till the next updatee!
<33

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withoutchange January 12 2011, 01:23:23 UTC
ahh, thank you for taking interest in reading this ♥
they're not all that popular pairings, but i love em.

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withoutchange January 12 2011, 01:23:46 UTC
soyeon and seungho are love :D
thank you for reading and please do continue!

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long comment #290423 anonymous January 11 2011, 01:18:57 UTC
ANGST. I LOVE ANGST. AS MUCH AS I LOVE FLUFF.

I wont go off on a broken record into why I love your writing because I always do that. (Like how I love how your style of writing can easily make me picture the scenario) But I'll talk more of the story!

I dont know why but I love that in a previous fic you can capture their sweet moments so well, and then their really angsty moments just as great too. Which idk is why I love G.O/Jooyeon. Knowing each other for 3-4 years, it really makes you question what kind of relationship they did have. And I feel like they could have so much more depth and everything and I would think something like him kissing another girl when he's drunk would happen bc....Byunghee would do that. And yeah! dksgjlfd.

I think Seungho/Soyeon goes well too. Seungho being that role of the best guy friend and nothing more 8( Oh Seungho <3 I wish I knew more about T-ARA besides their music and interaction with MBLAQ but I like at least how Soyeon and Jooyeon come to closure with it. That's quite classy of what ( ... )

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Re: long comment #290423 olvejuice January 11 2011, 01:20:07 UTC
What the hell? When did livejournal log me out :| dl;gjlfkd

But yeah! That's me. Not some random creeper 8)

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Re: long comment #290423 withoutchange January 12 2011, 01:28:53 UTC
hahahhaaha, i was about to be like, long comment from a creeper ♥ it's okay, even if you were, you'd be my favorite creeper.

and I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT. it's one of the first chaptered fic i am going to work seriously hard on. which is hard because i only usually write one shots. sigh.

and drunk byunghee worries me. hopefully i can make this fic long and intense and just .. intense (which i plan on doing with fist fights. sound good!?)

and i love seungho as much as i love g.o quite honestly. seungho/g.o/mir are my favorites. even though i love all of them too much. they only beat joon and cheondoong by like .. one point. that is it, anymore would be pushing it.

and YEEEEEES, i'm happy you found it to be good ♥♥

don't you think sanghyun is really badass? i think so. secretly at least o.o

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bollywoodrecord January 11 2011, 03:47:20 UTC
A chaptered fic of G.O/Jooyeon and Seungho/Soyeon?! I'm now so glad that we got kpoplikecrack going, juuuust so I could read this wonderful fics. I am so happy that you are doing a chaptered, because I am craving some of these two. :) Thanks so much for writing, like... FOREVER. :) Can't wait for the next chap.

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withoutchange January 12 2011, 01:29:31 UTC
i'm so happy you've taken interest, that makes me happy ♥
thank you!

chapters are hard. mfdaffewgeagw.

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elvenknight16 January 11 2011, 14:37:28 UTC
I love this~
I'm seriously glad you started writing this =D

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withoutchange January 12 2011, 01:29:58 UTC
thank you ♥
you and your amazing icon haha
please continue reading!

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elvenknight16 January 12 2011, 18:20:14 UTC
lol I think I'm obsessed xD
Thx =D
And I'll keep reading your lovely fics~
They're so sad but beautiful ^_^

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withoutchange January 13 2011, 01:57:16 UTC
your words are so kind n__n
thank you!

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