Comments | koutenki: Forever & Never

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Forever & Never

Jun 12, 2011 21:11

Forever
323 w, pg-13, (Seohyun/Kyuyun)
She doesn’t reach over and touch his hand like in some cliché movie she would make him watch in the summers

( Wow, he must be one hell of a husband to be able to fuck you over this much. )

Ξ : douc, fandom: super junior, ♥ : seohyun/kyuhyun, c.n. blue, ♥ : seohyun/yonghwa, fandom: snsd

Comments 24

Love both pairings anonymous June 13 2011, 02:53:33 UTC

I love this and the concept of it, SeoKyu is a forever right? And they dated in the past...? Love the last sentence, they're so cute eeep!

And YongSeo is so sad, all I see is angst for this pairing after the show ended, miss them with all my heart.

Keep up the great work and I hope to see more stuff from you in the future

Re: Love both pairings douc June 13 2011, 09:38:58 UTC

I also think the same about YongSeo but I also ended up writing all angsty stuff when it comes to them too TT

Thank you for reading and commenting~!

bollywoodrecord June 13 2011, 03:33:46 UTC

SPOT.

douc June 13 2011, 03:36:13 UTC

Spot granted
lol

bollywoodrecord June 13 2011, 06:03:24 UTC

Thank you :)

OKAY, WAIT, FIRST THING IS FIRST: WHAT IS THIS?!

I mean, this is angst for freaking everyone in this threesome - in Kyuhyun's case - and twosome - in Yonghwa's case. Like, I kind of wanted to cry. But I didn't. The second one, I really wish Yonghwa had a brain because I don't exactly understand what he's trying to... Accomplish? Maybe it was in between the lines and I didn't look deep enough or maybe it was just there and I'm an idiot XD The first one (I did this one last because I had more to say), OH MY GOSH SEOHYUN YOU MARRIED SOMEONE THAT WAS NOT KYUHYUN! That... That kills me, really. My favorite au is marriage, but angsty marriage, especially coming from SeoKyu... Ah that kills me. Your writing, it kills me.

Anyways, this was a bit rambling, so I'll stop now. Thank you so much for writing and I look forward to more of your fics :)

douc June 13 2011, 09:46:30 UTC

IT'S AN AUTOMATIC THING, I CAN'T HELP IT - I REALLY CAN'T /cries in a corner

Writing Yonghwa as an unsure guy is harder than I though LOL and she didn't literally marry Yonghwa it's only on the show in this fic (sorry for not making it clear in the story though - -")

You're not rambling at all and no, thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment :D

babypillow June 13 2011, 15:23:37 UTC

so sad that hyun give it her all and yong didn't even attempt!

douc June 15 2011, 07:41:41 UTC

I should throw myself off the cliff, shouldn't I? TT

hurryupdanger June 14 2011, 01:04:44 UTC

;A; MY SEOKYU AND YONGSEO. WAEEEE? I just love this, I just love thisssss! The SeoKyu, oh the Seokyu it's so bittersweet and the last line... ;A; And the YongSeo, I can totally see Yonghwa as a cowardly man hidden under his charismatic facade and Seohyun as the girl who just wants to know if he feels the same, like the very careful person that she is. Ugh. I just love a good angsty story, but I always end up wanting to cry (which is a good thing) This is so beautiful. ♥

douc June 15 2011, 07:44:40 UTC

Aww, you're always so sweet~!
I just have this thing with SeoKyu and angst to be honest, I don't even know why. I oddly can see him as a cowardly man too, he doesn't look like it but I used to think about it a lot. Angst is definitely my favorite genre to read but like you said, it can break hearts.

Thank you again for reading and commenting~♥

crossing_by June 14 2011, 04:57:35 UTC

aaahh ...
why???
but well ... if its meant to be ... than it will in the end
hahahaha

douc June 15 2011, 07:42:27 UTC

/incredibly guilty and now hiding