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carousel turning

Apr 24, 2011 23:08

carousel turning
2200 w, pg (jiyeon/mir, soyeon/seungho)
au! their adventures at the amusement park.

for firequakes
sorry it took me so long ): and if the end seems rushed, it isn't, i'm just braindead

( are you afraid of anything? )

♥ : jiyeon/mir, fandom: t-ara, ♥ : soyeon/seungho, fandom: mblaq, Ξ : withoutchange

Comments 6

firequakes April 25 2011, 04:35:05 UTC

ah OH MY GOD sdfsgfh this was even more perfect than i imagined it would be!

i really really love the banter between chulyong and everybody in this, and also seungho being everybody's boss. also joon as a furry mascot is just perfect, because personally, he is more appealing like that than when he's showing off his muscles (iow if he worked at the strength booth).

seungho/soyeon is also icing on the cake, but the part where jiyeon and mir ride the purple teacup, and claim it as their own, and chulyong totally plays a prank on her is my absolute favorite part.

thank you thank you thank you. i just woke up and this pm made my day ♥

withoutchange April 27 2011, 21:35:38 UTC

i am really glad you liked it since i had a good time writing it :D

they're really cute. cheolyong is also so funny, so so so funny, and i wasn't sure if i wrote him remotely funny enough, or if i even made him funny at all in this, but i love the kid. jiyeon is too cute too.

hypothermal April 25 2011, 15:41:00 UTC

i just keep getting sucked into this whole seungho/soyeon thing huh..

anyway. i'm not very familiar with both t-ara and mblaq but idk, sweetness knows no boundaries?! this is very, very good and i love it when i get to read something good. i liked the entire atmosphere of the fic, it kinda made me feel like i was at an amusement park myself.

much love, much love

bollywoodrecord April 25 2011, 23:00:23 UTC

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE. I really love when you write After School and MBLAQ. They just seem to go perfectly together. Haha, thanks for writing. :)

weerainbow May 2 2011, 18:59:07 UTC

^^ this was so sweet!! I really like the setting of the amusement park and the light-hearted feeling of the story. Cheolyong fits the place well and his interactions with Jiyeon were so loveable. It was a really natural kind of story, something that made me feel happy and peaceful at the same time and when I got to the end I sighed in contentment :o)
Oh and I also happen to like the bit of Seungho/Soyeon coupling too, it was very them if you get me ^^
♥

dreamofrevelry May 3 2011, 04:49:00 UTC

Naw! CUTE!! This was all too cute! Thanks for making my night. keke :3