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[FIC] Deliverance - R - 797

Feb 23, 2011 21:34

Title: Deliverance
Author: koushi
Pairing: Cobb/Nash
Rating: R
Word count: 797
Disclaimer: I do not own Inception or any of its characters.
Warnings: Abuse, being an apologist for said abuse, ass o' clock writing that may or may not be coherent. TLDR: fucked up shit.
Author's note: Abstractly follows The Blue Look and is a response to Absolution.

( I was glad that at least one of us had found peace, and I was ready to make it two. )

genre: romance, genre: dark, fic, char: cobb, genre: angst, char: nash, cobb/nash, rating: r

Comments 2

kirstenlouise February 24 2011, 03:58:12 UTC

I AM KIND OF IN LOVE WITH FIRST PERSON RIGHT NOW, JUST SO YOU KNOW. IF MY RB ENDS UP IN FIRST PERSON, I BLAME YOU AND KATIE FOR ENCOURAGING ME. Though first person porn, lol, IDK about that!

Warnings ahead of time for ridiculous quotage. I fucking adore your Cobb as it is, but actually getting inside his head is making me like squirm all over with a combination of fear and excitement. Naturally, I wouldn't have it any other way. I love being inside Cobb's head, however fucked up a place it may be.

There’s someone out there who would take you all over the world, kiss you in every city; someone who would hold your hand on long walks under the buzz of the city lights; someone who would tell you that you’re beautiful.

I know all of this, which is exactly why I have to swallow the key.This is just beautiful and absolutely heartbreaking. Someone who would kiss him in every city.. GAH, MY HEARTSTRINGS FEEL SO TUGGED ON RN. You just show me these lovely little moments that could have been and two lines later you're reminding me that they' ( ... )

my_kakistocracy February 24 2011, 04:24:47 UTC

You already know how I feel about this, but...yeah.

This is just so gut-wrenchingly heartfelt, I love all the complexities of his thoughts, and like Kirsten said...that sort of unnerving calmness with which he describes his inner torment.

This whole relationship hits me in such a deep, emotional place I can't even. I love them, and you. Forever. <3