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[FIC] The Blue Look - R - 1984

Feb 05, 2011 14:12

Title: The Blue Look
Author: koushi
Pairing: Cobb/Nash
Rating: R
Word count: 1984
Disclaimer: I do not own Inception or any of its characters.
Summary: Sequel to The Red Look. Following this are Absolution by my_kakistocracy and Deliverance by koushi.
Warnings: Violence, asphxyiation, physical and emotional abuse, alcoholism, possible character death.
Author's note: Beta'd ( Read more... )

genre: romance, genre: dark, fic, char: cobb, genre: angst, char: nash, cobb/nash, rating: r

Comments 6

kirstenlouise February 5 2011, 21:07:11 UTC

Nash had surmised that removing his store would be removing his addiction, his dependency, and his violent behavior-bringing back the man he’d fallen for so many years ago.

You already know how much I love this line, but it bears repeating. I find it really intriguing (yet fitting) that Nash has such a poor understanding of addiction. It's sort of sweet how simple he thinks it will be, but also interesting in light of his relationship with Dom, which definitely mirrors the negative qualities of addiction. He just keeps going back, no matter how he gets hurt. If only Nash had someone willing to pull him out. DDDDD:

Another favorite line, regarding Nash's hand: the one he’d used to sketch out all his blueprints, the one Dom had held the first time they walked out into the public as a couple, the one that shook as he poured all the expensive aged bottles of whiskey, bourbon, and scotch down the drainFUCK I LOVE THOSE LINES. I CANNOT TELL YOU THAT ENOUGH. I want to go curl up in these lines and just stay there. The little glimpse you ( ... )

koushi February 5 2011, 21:20:51 UTC

I HEART YOU FOREVER! <333

Call me cruel, but nostalgia is my weapon of choice for heart destruction. >:D

Seriously, functional relationships are so '87.

Endless thanks for your help! :D

my_kakistocracy February 6 2011, 03:44:22 UTC

Ach, this is beautiful, Koushi!

He ran his fingers over Nash’s tousled brown locks, down to personally rub at each scar, tenderly… lovingly, as if to pay homage to his own handiwork, like it made him proud in some perverse way to see Nash bear his badges of honor. <--I adore this, especially.

Also, A+ reference to retinal detachment, hahahaha. :D

Nash seems so selfless here, poor bb. Like he is dying for Cobb's sins--Nash, darling, I think I may start mistaking you for Jesus! But I bet even the Good Lord didn't turn all those lovely colors up there on Calvary. :3

I love how descriptive you are with Nash's thoughts-- I can just about feel Angry Cobb's hands around my neck. I feel like this was a welcome-back-to-cyberspace present just for me. <3

koushi February 7 2011, 02:35:40 UTC

They've always been presents for you, haven't they? :D

my_kakistocracy February 7 2011, 03:15:18 UTC

And I have always been thoroughly appreciative. <3

forgerness February 26 2011, 00:50:37 UTC

Your Cobb's delusion still continues to impress me. I like him here even better than The Red Look. We really get to see what's going on inside his head and what he believes is true but really is just his messed up version of the truth ( ... )