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kotahcola

Stones Once Stars

Jun 04, 2011 01:58

Stones Once Stars
2030 words, rated PG-13
SHINee: Onew/Key
Summary: Jinki falls for Kibum. Kibum just falls.
Warnings: This fic contains character death.
Notes: This is the first time I've written SHINee. Maybe it's not too awful. For a friend, because she loves OnKey. Inspired by Light Years by Pearl Jam, because I love grunge.

( Catch a falling star an' put it in your pocket... )

pairing: key/onew, member: onew, group: shinee

Comments 24

ahem_bpoutarawr June 4 2011, 11:03:33 UTC

at first i was like... LMAO! the tall cow-eyed man? what a nice way to call him :)
but then .. T-T what happen to Kibum? and Jinki... it's so heartbreaking.. ;_;
good job it's not awful, love it!!

kotahcola June 4 2011, 15:58:51 UTC

Well, I love Minho, but Jinki was mad at him when he called him that...so it might not be the most flattering description but it fits.

It's kind of vague, huh? I'm not a doctor, so I didn't want to go into too many details. Kibum has an illness of some sort and slips into a vegetable like state. Jinki pulls the plug, but he hates himself for doing so. =D

Thanks for reading, commenting, and being so nice! It means a lot!

ahem_bpoutarawr June 4 2011, 16:14:14 UTC

well, i prefer cow-eyed man than froggy-eyed man. cow has beautiful eyelashes =3

kotahcola June 4 2011, 16:22:51 UTC

I prefer cow-eyed man because that's what I think they look like. They are so soft and beautiful. And those eyelashes! I could go on and on about the beauty that is Minho.

I actually could talk about them all forever...

written_notes June 4 2011, 14:04:36 UTC

I really liked this. it was kind of quiet and had this pensive feel about it? but even though it's sad that Kibum died, did Jinki kill himself in the end?

kotahcola June 4 2011, 16:01:29 UTC

Yeah, Jinki wants to be with Kibum, and he feels that it how they will be together. He wants to live on as the star Kibum said that he would be.

Thank you so much for reading this. I know it's not the best quality, but it means the world to me! ^_^

volatileflame June 4 2011, 18:45:47 UTC

this was heartbreaking, but it was so beautiful at the same time <3

kotahcola June 5 2011, 00:44:02 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! ^_^

jinkibumiminho June 5 2011, 05:55:51 UTC

Beautiful and sad. I really enjoy your style!

kotahcola June 5 2011, 14:57:33 UTC

Why, thank you so much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. And thanks again for reading and for commenting! It makes my day!

paduwa025 June 5 2011, 16:27:43 UTC

T.T sweet but sad
<3 <3 >3 it

kotahcola June 5 2011, 18:16:04 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for reading! =D