Primeval fic: Bathed By Blood (1/16)

[knitekat]

Title: Bathed By Blood (1/16)
Author: knitekat
Word Count: ~3425 (of a total ~47955)
Characters: James Lester, Tom Ryan and a cast of RPs, OCs and OHs.
Pairing: James Lester/Tom Ryan
Rating: 18
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N 1: Part of my AU Bloodverse series and

Comments

[fredbassett]

Great opening chapter!

I love the way you've used the dialects in this. It's a hard trick to pull off and you've done it very well indeed.

Great universe :)

[knitekat]

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading/beta-ing/paw-holding.

I just hope the dialect is correct, there isn't all that much on the Internet on use.

Hee, Bloodverse is fun ;)

Thanks again.

[nietie]

Ooh, nice start.

[knitekat]

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading. Hope you like the rest of the fic.

[telperion_15]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I believe that sums up my reaction accurately! *g*

[knitekat]

*rubs ears* Hee, I think Tel liked it a lot ;)

Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest of it.

[fififolle]

Mmmm, delicious! What fun!! This is going to be fantastic :D nomnomnom

[knitekat]

Hee, the boys are delicious. Meep (I hope so). Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[lsellersfic]

Ooh! I wonder why the police are there!

[knitekat]

Thanks but heed the warnings You will find out in Part 2. Thanks for reading.