If you think you can take me, take your chance, Hobbit Boy.”
OMG, I actually jumped up and cheered at that line. :)
The love sceen with Jensen and Jared was absolutely beautiful. There was so much love between those two that you could actually feel it. Left me breathless. And the end has me scared shitless. lol
Good for Steve standing up to Chris (although a VERY SMALL part of me feels a little sorry for Chris, because it seemed like he really does love Steve and had changed his life for the better to be with him) and not letting him manipulate him back into his clutches. But oh dear, Jared's just making enemies everywhere he goes and I just KNEW that Chris and Tom would end up bumping into one another. I loved all that part from Mike's POV, really made me chuckle even though the situation was so serious. And then we get some mind blowing sex, this chapter just has it all. :D *runs for more*
Steve really did need to stand up on his own two feet for both his own sake as well as Chris'. Chris really does love Steve, but I think he needed this to finish getting himself headed toward the right path.
Jared is a pro at making enemies, but you will see more of that in the next story. YEah, I think the Chris Tom was predictable, but it had to be done. I like Mike in this, but I have come to realize I have a REALLY hard time writing him. I can't wrap my head around him for anything bigger than a bit part. My Money Verse is killing me because he takes such a big part in it and I can't figure him out. But I am glad you enjoyed his part in this.
Mind blowing sex huh? HA! I hate my sex scenes so I am glad you enjoyed it.
WOW ! Now that is what I call 1 HOT reunion for Jared & Jensen. I hope that they are able to make things work if Tom gives them the chance. Not liking that part about Chris regretting something later after he continued to drink after Tom shows him the gun.
I hate that Tom & Chris are both blaming Jared for something that is their fault & as for Jared manipulating Jensen, that's like the pot calling the kettle black
Just a few things I noticed & not trying to offend
Jared put pillows under his lips Think it was Jensen but either way should under his hips
HA! Glad you liked the sex scene. I always think they are my weak point. Jared and Jensen will always prevail. The Tom's of the world just don't know it. Yeah, had to do a little foreshadowing with Chris.
Tom is an evil little shit in this, and Chris is just falling back into old patterns here. It's easlier for Chris to blame Jared than admit he has created the mess he's in.
Thanks for the corrections! I think no matter how much you have something beta'd when it's this long you're gonna miss things, so I appreciate your help and will get the corrections made.
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OMG, I actually jumped up and cheered at that line. :)
The love sceen with Jensen and Jared was absolutely beautiful. There was so much love between those two that you could actually feel it. Left me breathless. And the end has me scared shitless. lol
On to 4 .... :)
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Glad you like the love scene. I always think they are my weakness. The ending is... well you'll see. *g* Can't ruin the surprise.
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But oh dear, Jared's just making enemies everywhere he goes and I just KNEW that Chris and Tom would end up bumping into one another.
I loved all that part from Mike's POV, really made me chuckle even though the situation was so serious.
And then we get some mind blowing sex, this chapter just has it all. :D
*runs for more*
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Steve really did need to stand up on his own two feet for both his own sake as well as Chris'. Chris really does love Steve, but I think he needed this to finish getting himself headed toward the right path.
Jared is a pro at making enemies, but you will see more of that in the next story. YEah, I think the Chris Tom was predictable, but it had to be done. I like Mike in this, but I have come to realize I have a REALLY hard time writing him. I can't wrap my head around him for anything bigger than a bit part. My Money Verse is killing me because he takes such a big part in it and I can't figure him out. But I am glad you enjoyed his part in this.
Mind blowing sex huh? HA! I hate my sex scenes so I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I hate that Tom & Chris are both blaming Jared for something that is their fault & as for Jared manipulating Jensen, that's like the pot calling the kettle black
Just a few things I noticed & not trying to offend
Jared put pillows under his lips Think it was Jensen but either way should under his hips
the allies of Vancouver should be the alleys
Off to read Chapter 4
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Tom is an evil little shit in this, and Chris is just falling back into old patterns here. It's easlier for Chris to blame Jared than admit he has created the mess he's in.
Thanks for the corrections! I think no matter how much you have something beta'd when it's this long you're gonna miss things, so I appreciate your help and will get the corrections made.
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You're welcome.
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