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kliqzangel

Steps Verse: Seventh Step - To Be Selfless

Jun 28, 2007 18:25

Title: Seventh Step: To Be Selfless ( Read more... )

chad michael murray, angst, au, mike, j2, steps verse

Comments 15

keyweegirlie June 29 2007, 09:54:36 UTC

you made Chad the voice of reason...wow....plus it worked. :)

great work Sweetie....I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.
*hugs*
-C-

kliqzangel July 28 2007, 18:12:12 UTC

Yeah. This is the debut of my Softer Less-Douche!Chad. I love him to pieces. I LOVE YOUR ICON!! Hopefully the next Step will be out early next week.

keyweegirlie July 29 2007, 04:17:38 UTC

This is the debut of my Softer Less-Douche!Chad.

Well, I liked this version...so good job! ;)

I LOVE YOUR ICON!!

Thanks! I made it, so if you wanna snag it to use you can...

*hugs*
-C-

sheet_of_clay June 29 2007, 20:48:21 UTC

Hey!! Awesome chapter...I've waiting for this. Thank you

kliqzangel July 28 2007, 18:12:52 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Next Step out soon.

new chapter deanvica23 July 20 2007, 15:39:41 UTC

I really liked this chapter. That chad says at jared, that jensen likes it , that nobody will be able to relace it in the the life of jensen. That was beautiful. chad understood the force of the feelings of jensen -jared. I was sad that jared suffers. But jensen took a step for jared. Now jared and jensen must do it together. Jensen must show at jared that it did it by love for him and that mike doesn't count. I liked when jared says at chad that it will sleep with his boyfriend. It was cute . Give us beautiful scene of sex, with much love , of tenderness, i love you between jensen and jared .

deanvica.

Re: new chapter kliqzangel July 28 2007, 18:15:05 UTC

Thanks! I am glad everyone enjoyed the Seventh Step even though it took so long. I'm still working on a sweet sex scene. Unfortunately the Eighth step doesn't have any of that. But I think it is a good Jensen/Jared chapter. It should be out early next week.

iamthedirtgirl August 5 2007, 12:59:42 UTC

Hey, I just found this verse and spent most of the night reading the whole thing in one go. I gotta tell you, I don't usually like to read rps where the boys are abused or addicted, in fact I usually read the more amusing, total au's where everyone is present but in totally different lives. But this got me curious when I saw it rec'd at storyfinders and wow. It's been so intense. The way everyone talks to each other is so realistic. I have had these types of convesations with people. I know people, one in particular, who has been through the level of abuse you've written for Jensen and you really nailed how it goes and what abusers say and do and how it messes with the minds of the victims so much. It's a constant, exhaustive battle to keep reminding the person they are worth so much more and are beautiful and not all the horrible things they've been brainwashed to believe. When you pulled out the devilin you thing I got chills. My friend grew up with that and it's just horrifying and I think you are doing an amazing thing telling ( ... )

kliqzangel August 5 2007, 15:46:18 UTC

WOW!! Thanks ( ... )

Wow! sunset_dark August 6 2007, 11:59:20 UTC

Just wanted to say, following a rec of your story, I've read straight through and it's great stuff, I can't wait to hear what happens to the boys next. The pain each of them is suffering is tearing my heart into pieces and how they are trying so hard to fix things. Keep up the good work.

Re: Wow! kliqzangel August 20 2007, 00:46:58 UTC

Glad you found it and enjoyed it. Hope you saw the Eighth Step. This 'Verse is painful for sure, but I love writing it. Somehow it makes you feel good at the same time too I think.

More will come I promise!