FIC: Die a Little - Day Five, HP, SS/SB, NC-17

[kleio_the_muse]

I was a bit quicker with this than I initially thought, but I hope that's fine with everybody!

(Okay, to tell you the truth, I wasn't any quicker - fluffyllama was and I love her for it

Comments

[matyas_adina]

I'm not sure I liked this chapter. There were parts I found just as great as in the previous ones-but I didn't like the sex scene. I hope you will deal with Snape, becouse now I just feel sorry for him. Oh hell, I'm quite curious what will happen now, so after all this had to be a great chapter, I'm just still too stunned to realize it.

[kleio_the_muse]

I sort of anticipated this... Not just with you, obviously, but in general; I knew what I made Sirius do would not go well with what people expect from him. I have no excuses for it, really - it merely happened that way, and no matter what I tried, I couldn't change it.

I hope I can make it all better in the two final parts:)

[matyas_adina]

I almost forgot. I friended you, I hope you don't mind.

[kleio_the_muse]

Of course I don't mind:) I'm only sorry if I can't friend you back at the moment, as my internet connection is sort of in jeopardy and I can barely keep up with the flist that I've got:(

[gmth]

Whoa. This chapter went off in all kinds of ways I didn't expect it to. The appearance of Lucius made me wriggle with joy, and I'm kinds of into non-con so that stuff was right up my alley (you might consider adding a non-con warning, though). I'm so curious as the genesis of Sirius's jealousy, though. I'm looking forward to reading more about that. And oh, what will Snape do next...? Can't wait to find out! :-)

[gmth]

Erm... that should read "I'm all kinds of into non-con..." My fingers didn't cooperate there.

[kleio_the_muse]

Yes, I know Sirius' actions sort of came out of the blue, but there was really nothing I could do to change that... The jealosy thing would have needed more development, you're right, but the poor chap seemed quite clueless of it himself until it hit him. I'll try to shed more light on it in the next chapter.

I'm only glad I haven't scared you off just yet:)

[blackletter]

I just found this story and...wow. I like it. I really really like it. It's incredibly dark, and yet startlingly humerous at times, too. And that combination of dark and funny sucks me in every time.

Also, I think the characterization is fantastic. Snape is evil, yet pitiable. Sirius is stubborn and difficult (and dead!) and the animosity between them is wonderful.

[kleio_the_muse]

Thank you, dear! I'm so glad you like the combo (dark&humorous), 'cause that's really all I'm able to write;). And I was really fretting over this part in particular, so it's great to hear you weren't freaked out by Sirius' actions. It really means a lot:)

[tasogare_n_hime]

Wow every chapter just brings me in deeper. now I feel sorry for both Sirius and Severus. I noticed some people complaning about this chapter but to me it just adds another dimention to story. it's not something i see a lot in fanfiction, but I find it amasing how you can have Snape play the victime and still be well...Snape. Briliant. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

[kleio_the_muse]

Oh, I'm so relieved that you say that! This was really the one I feared posting the most, because I knew Sirius' actions would seem uncharacteristic to some (if not many). So, thank you, dear. Much appreciated:)