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Batman: Meanwhile in Gotham City 2/3

Apr 16, 2013 18:47

Title: Batman: Meanwhile in Gotham City 2/3
Author: KLCtheBookWorm klcthebookworm
Characters/Pairings: John Blake, Jim Gordon, Barbara "Babs" Gordon, Jen, Lucius Fox, Johnathan Crane, Gerard Stephens, and Oswald Cobblepott III
Rating: T
Summary: Blake thought being a detective was the hardest thing he'd ever done, until he became Gotham's protector. But he's not ( Read more... )

fanfic, batman

Comments 4

tinpra April 18 2013, 17:21:17 UTC

1st, I'm so glad you linked to this story in the more recent Bruce/Selina. 2nd, are you seriously ending here???

That covered, I like how you're bringing in the var elements, particularly your bad guys (I'm pondering Cobblepott, too). The first part felt more jumpy than the second, but overall I've really enjoyed it. Now on to read the most recent story before I lose it.

klcthebookworm April 18 2013, 22:43:54 UTC

1st, I'm so glad you linked to this story in the more recent Bruce/Selina. -- Okay, I just got slammed with some bad news and my sister is getting married this weekend (and has that been some stressful fun too), so I don't know what you mean? I didn't link it to the bat/cat fandoms and I was waiting to put up the whole series in the TDKR. Did I put a link on "Forgiveness" and forgot about it? Use small words.

2nd, are you seriously ending here??? Err, no? Part 3 is going up as soon as I finish my business shit I have to get done before we travel tomorrow.

Okay, I got the email sent, so my headspace is getting better. At least it feels like the brain has turned on.

That covered, I like how you're bringing in the var elements, particularly your bad guys (I'm pondering Cobblepott, too). --"var elements"? I can't figure out that typo, I'm sorry ( ... )

tinpra April 18 2013, 23:37:00 UTC

1st, I'm so glad you linked to this story in the more recent Bruce/Selina.
I now see why this is a confusing comment to have made. I've been reading this on my phone's browser, which has been doing wonky things with tabs, and so I thought that the older Bruce/Selina story was the more recent one and this one was the older. Which prompted the next comment of...

2nd, are you seriously ending here???...since I could have sworn the story was complete. And the story I thought I was reading is complete. It's just not this story. Sorry for the confusion. Stressed-out brains really don't need any additional work ( ... )

klcthebookworm April 19 2013, 02:17:33 UTC

2nd, are you seriously ending here???
...since I could have sworn the story was complete. And the story I thought I was reading is complete. It's just not this story. Sorry for the confusion. Stressed-out brains really don't need any additional work.
Amen to that. Okay, now it's finished: Part Three is up now. I consider this number 5 of the series that really needs a name. Story number 4 is Forgiveness is for the Living and it's finished and ignored on LJ. :p

"var elements" is not a typo, it's shorthand for "various elements [of the bat-world]" OOOOOOOOOOH! Now it makes sense. :D I love shifting the elements to fit in the Nolanverse. Now if only the rest of the Justice League would cooperate, I'd have happier readers ( ... )