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kjcp

Apparition

Mar 08, 2007 22:42

Title: Apparition
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13
Type: One-shot, angst, complete
Summary: Remus deals with an unexpected breakup with Sirius.

( Apparition )

angst, pg13, complete, remus/sirius, one-shot

Comments 21

carmine_ink March 9 2007, 03:59:51 UTC

Oh, that was a wonderful piece of angst. "Poor Remus" doesn't even begin to cover it... *sigh* Great job. ;)

kjcp March 9 2007, 12:36:09 UTC

Thanks. I felt a bit sorry for Remus myself after writing that ;)

tresa_cho March 9 2007, 04:54:19 UTC

Interesting. Your prose is a bit crude, but that will change with practice. I like the idea you have here, and though Remus is a bit out of character I feel, I think you did a great job with this story.

tresa_cho March 9 2007, 04:55:30 UTC

Crude? Practice? Right.

tresa_cho March 9 2007, 05:28:46 UTC

You have a very high opinion of yourself, don't you?

kjcp March 9 2007, 12:43:28 UTC

I don't even know how I am supposed to respond to this :/

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aquila_star March 9 2007, 06:22:06 UTC

Ouch. Oh...it just kept getting worse as it was explained. Wow.

Wonderfully done. *grins*

kjcp March 9 2007, 12:36:45 UTC

Thanks. :D

sleeper6 March 9 2007, 06:51:01 UTC

Bittersweet. But so well done.

kjcp March 9 2007, 12:37:27 UTC

Aw thanks :) I'm glad you liked it.

mrsquizzical March 9 2007, 12:02:07 UTC

great idea. the tension built as what had happened became more clear.

*sniff*

kjcp March 9 2007, 12:38:16 UTC

I love it when Bryan and Justin cling!!

Yeah - I was hoping tension would build and I was hoping that it would take a couple "days" before what really happened became clear.