Livejournal
Log in
Post
Friends
My journal
kjcp
Apparition
Mar 08, 2007 22:42
Title: Apparition
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13
Type: One-shot, angst, complete
Summary: Remus deals with an unexpected breakup with Sirius.
(
Apparition
)
angst
,
pg13
,
complete
,
remus/sirius
,
one-shot
Leave a comment
Comments 21
Previous
happi_feet
March 9 2007, 15:26:59 UTC
I love the way you worked backward with this piece. It was very well thought out.
Reply
kjcp
March 9 2007, 21:44:30 UTC
Haha thanks - it took a couple tries to get it right. Writing backwards ended up being a lot harder than I thought it would be.
Reply
kawaii_tenshi27
March 10 2007, 03:29:22 UTC
Brilliant, truly. For some reason, Lily's line James is looking after Harry right now just really moved me - even more than the rest of it, which was all very moving as well.
I liked the style, and the format (reverse chronology). Very well done. :)
Reply
kjcp
March 10 2007, 14:25:34 UTC
Yeah I liked that line too ;)
Thanks for your comment
Reply
thinkwell
March 10 2007, 08:01:07 UTC
I think it took me till the third one to realize that you were going backwards in time. -feels stupid-
And I absolutely didn't know that Sirius did NOT break up with Remus until the last one.
It was a brilliant concept for a fic.
Reply
kjcp
March 10 2007, 14:24:51 UTC
Yay!! I'm glad you were surprisd!! :)
Reply
shinzuku
August 3 2007, 23:15:03 UTC
Aww. I like how it goes backwards.
Reply
Previous
Leave a comment
Up
Comments 21
Reply
Reply
I liked the style, and the format (reverse chronology). Very well done. :)
Reply
Thanks for your comment
Reply
And I absolutely didn't know that Sirius did NOT break up with Remus until the last one.
It was a brilliant concept for a fic.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment