Apparition

[kjcp]

Title: Apparition
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13
Type: One-shot, angst, complete
Summary: Remus deals with an unexpected breakup with Sirius.

Comments

[happi_feet]

I love the way you worked backward with this piece. It was very well thought out.

[kjcp]

Haha thanks - it took a couple tries to get it right. Writing backwards ended up being a lot harder than I thought it would be.

[kawaii_tenshi27]

Brilliant, truly. For some reason, Lily's line James is looking after Harry right now just really moved me - even more than the rest of it, which was all very moving as well.

I liked the style, and the format (reverse chronology). Very well done. :)

[kjcp]

Yeah I liked that line too ;)

Thanks for your comment

[thinkwell]

I think it took me till the third one to realize that you were going backwards in time. -feels stupid-

And I absolutely didn't know that Sirius did NOT break up with Remus until the last one.

It was a brilliant concept for a fic.

[kjcp]

Yay!! I'm glad you were surprisd!! :)

[shinzuku]

Aww. I like how it goes backwards.