Fic for marlenem

Apr 09, 2012 21:43

Title: If you want me to stay (I'll be okay)
Pairing: Akanishi Jin/Kamenashi Kazuya
Word count: ~5,000 + notes
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Lots of canon references, mentions of Jincidents, angst all over the bay.
Notes: Translation sources include kattunlove, newshfan, chikara21, shou_negi, iside89, and jone_records. With unabashed and devoted gratitude and affection for certain people and their ( Read more... )

wc:5k-10k, +kame/jin, wc:1k-5k, k_x 2012, *pg-13, -canon

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acchikocchi April 9 2012, 18:10:40 UTC
I'm a total sucker for fics with extratextual elements - the notes, the cards the script pages - and these were executed so well that this was just lsdfajkla;dfd like candy to me. And that of course is not even to mention the lovely writing. :) I agree with the above commenter, that the ending isn't necessarily sad. It's bittersweet, but not bleak, because even if it wasn't how we or they once thought things would end up, there was resolution. And that's what seems to be missing so often, with this group.

Anyway, this was a lovely read and I'm so happy to have it as part of K-X. <3

(And my, what beautiful formatting! :D)

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singlehappiness May 2 2012, 22:29:04 UTC
Thank you so, so much!! We're kind of ridiculously glad you thought so - that's what we were initially going for, the resolution. And it was a privilege and delight to be part of k_x, of course. ♥ thank you for all of your hard work!

(hahaha, thank you kindly ♥! The battles with HTML paid off... ;))

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alienashi April 9 2012, 18:31:43 UTC
oh wow. i guess a huge part of me is delighted to have read this is because you kept their relationship so close, very close to canon and it can only mean one thing -- it drives people to remember their own relationships and mirroring that with that of kame & jin's (or what could possibly be theirs). this is a very, very contemplative piece, and every element in it, the pictures, the postcards, the letters (of course, you can hit me on the head if this turns out to be false), added to the subtlety of your writing. like you had written in your fic, the loudest, most obvious extras in here only served to accentuate the more silent but very powerful sense of realism. seldom is a fic this effective in reminding people why they have shipped akame in the first place; having seen many threw away the ship due to ..recent happenings and their own perceived feelings for..any half of the equation. i rambled, but why yes i have greatly enjoyed this piece and couldn't think of any better way to kick start the exchange ( ... )

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singlehappiness May 2 2012, 22:33:47 UTC
Hi, Joo. ♥ it drives people to remember their own relationships and mirroring that with that of kame & jin's (or what could possibly be theirs) is probably my favorite comment on this, because I consider it a great achievement to be able to produce something so resonant with the reader, and just. Thank you. For the absolutely lovely comment, especially because I am somewhat aware of where you stand on the borderline with this pairing and the events that have surpassed, and we're just very, very moved and glad you liked it so much and found something in it that struck a chord and made you feel. That's, really, all we could ask for.

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yuuki_saya April 9 2012, 20:40:04 UTC
It took me a while to write anything, but I've had to calm myself a bit.

Dear Anon-san! My heart is on the verge of refusing working for me, because after any of that sad fic it has really tough job with keeping me alive. But somehow it's good once in a while read something like that - their journey, where they're so close, yet so far, so together and so apart. When you know, that as lovers they're ideal, that friendship is only the beginning, but the reality doesn't let you fulfill that particular need of being with your soulmate.

I know I make no sense, but that's the state of incoherence I'm in right now. And somehow everything is right.

Thank you!

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singlehappiness May 2 2012, 22:35:39 UTC
We're sorry for being the causation of sadness :( but... yes, reality may speak contrary to what is ideal, and sometimes things just aren't meant to be. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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jamie_spotty April 9 2012, 20:45:10 UTC
This is such a perfect start for this exchange. This fic broke my heart in so many ways. I love everything about it, how Kame couldn't exactly say what he really wanted and JIn was no better. The ending was just a final note for them but so open at the same time. The notes/pieces of everything made the impact of the emotions too real. This is a very wonderful piece. Heartbreaking yet full of hope.

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singlehappiness May 2 2012, 22:36:30 UTC
Thank you so much! We were admittedly a bit anxious about seeing this posted first, but we're very happy you thought so, and that the emotions came across for you (especially the hope). ♥

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kurakura_chan April 10 2012, 01:29:14 UTC
this is making me feel so sad ;______;
akame love story is nothing but heartbreaking *cries*
i love this ♥♥♥

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singlehappiness May 2 2012, 22:36:51 UTC
:( So sorry for the heartbreak! Glad you enjoyed it though - thank you ♥

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