Fic for marlenem

[formation_akame]

Title: If you want me to stay (I'll be okay)
Pairing: Akanishi Jin/Kamenashi Kazuya
Word count: ~5,000 + notes
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Lots of canon references, mentions of Jincidents, angst all over the bay.
Notes: Translation sources include kattunlove, newshfan, chikara21, shou_negi, iside89, and jone_records. With unabashed and devoted gratitude and affection for certain people and their

Comments

[debbris]

This fic brings the whole ' we're never meant to be' to a different level. Whatever they had from years back, it's nice to see them moving on in this fic.

Anon, you did a great job by minimizing the angst yet a simple line like this can crush me in less than a second -> " You deserve the kind of love that people write songs about. "

[singlehappiness]

Thank you so much - we're glad the "not meant to be" part came through; that's what we were aiming for. :) thank you for the kind words! ♥

[bellemelody]

This is wonderful and this feeling right now, the melancholy and something so tender to Akame! I love it! It's heartbreaking, but in the same time so realistic for me. All the angst gives a feeling of love, that sometimes is just too hard to have and to protect.

The line about Ueda and him beng as a flower and rock! I love it so much!
And the moment with Akame after 1582 performance!

Dear anon! Thank you for very touching and warm fic! Your heroes are wonderful and all the pics and notes, I love it :)

Thank you :)

[singlehappiness]

Thank you so much bb! And for pointing out the parts you liked best, too. We're so glad you enjoyed it :') and your usage of "heroes" brought a smile to my face jskldksl. ♥

[marsbareater12]

oh holy shit.

you mean to tell me...this isn't fanfic? D: but it works so perfectly!

/casually bawling

[singlehappiness]

:( Sorry for the tears! Thank you for reading. ♥

[yumiko_okahawa]

Oh, this is very nice to read :)
I like the characters, they seems so real and just so human and I love that in this fic, as I found it rare in fics these days.
And how you made the timeline and threw in all the messages and pics... I am a HUGE fan of messages that say so much in just so few words. This is so perfect ♥

I enjoyed this so much! Thank you for this, it's been a wonderful, heartbreaking and yet just so beautiful, read.

[singlehappiness]

We're very glad they struck you as realistic! It's what we were striving for. Also really happy you liked the messages - credit for that goes to my partner(s)-in-crime ;)

Thank you so much! ♥

[misao_duo]

leaving comments on fics like this - that one is crying when they finish, and then they go back to peek again at some favorite parts and get weepy all over again - is hard, but here goes my effort anyway, because fics like this also demand that one leaves a comment. They need all the comments, really.

I want to start this by congratulating you on you utterly delightful attention to detail and the obvious effort you put into putting this whole fic together.
All the little quotes from dramas, magazines and videos would already be really cool/fitting, but there's also the pictures so the final piece is a fic that it's incredibly, wonderfully visual in many senses and, wow, i was truly blown away

[singlehappiness]

Ugh Paty, I am having such difficulty replying to this properly T_____T just want you to know that seeing this comment really, really made my day, and we're so very glad you liked all the little details and messages and that everything was coherent enough to leave such a strong impact on you. ♥ I have to admit my favorite part of your comment was the digression about heartbreak, because we honestly didn't mean for it to be devastating as much as closure and bittersweet... and that's about as eloquent as I get, unfortunately :( but I think you understand, and just, really happy that shone through for you.

Thank you so much, darling. The last thing we want is for you to be a "pathetic ball of feelings" but... to know that we evoked feelings is thrilling and touching. Thank you for the lovely, lovely comment ♥