Scrap: 015, Guilt
Title: Guilt
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Angst
Rating: Teen/+
Fandom/Original: Original
Prompt: no way out
Status: Complete
Word Count: 1209
Author’s Notes: Thanks to demon_fish, this drabble almost doubled. ;] Your concrit was appreciated.
Summary:
( Guilt )
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Angst
Rating: Teen/+
Fandom/Original: Original
Prompt: no way out
Status: Complete
Word Count: 1209
Author’s Notes: Thanks to demon_fish, this drabble almost doubled. ;] Your concrit was appreciated.
Summary:
( Guilt )
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The old man really is just a storyteller, though. He met the boy long ago, before all the shit happened.
As for the boy, the boy’s been turned into an immortal and trapped in the middle of the dancers in the king’s ballroom until he agrees to play for the king. As for the king? Er- he’s someone or other. (coughs) Should I have added that in? Or can this stand alone?
Yes, that means the old man’s an immortal, too.
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This is just one. Yes, this is a good stand alone but there are so many questions that I'm interested to know more of the story. Ergo more.
The warm breaths on the boy's skin, but there doesn't appear to be anyone there, is erotic (should have been creepy but I didn't find it so.) The bright green eyes and touch of a hand on his chin *shivers in delight*
Those dancers should be dead by now. The god that's holding our captive should be getting to the point of trying another means to sweeten he up.
You have a storyteller. You could weave anything.
or
You could just leave this as a stand alone. *unhappy sigh*
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Guilt!Storyteller: C’mon, you’ve gotta develop my character some more.
Guilt!Musician: And I am not staying with that-that creepy, sadistic-
Guilt!King: Who’s the one who’s refusing to play a little song for me, huh?
G!Storyteller: *shoves G!Musician and G!King off a cliff* As I was saying-
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