Scrap: 015, Guilt

[kittymarks]

Title: Guilt
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Angst
Rating: Teen/+
Fandom/Original: Original
Prompt: no way out

Status: Complete
Word Count: 1209

Author’s Notes: Thanks to demon_fish, this drabble almost doubled. ;] Your concrit was appreciated.
Summary:

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[charisstoma]

The old man is the boy? Was going to guess that the King was a fairy lord but hmm which god in which mythology has bright green eyes?

[kittymarks]

Keep guessing?

The old man really is just a storyteller, though. He met the boy long ago, before all the shit happened.

As for the boy, the boy’s been turned into an immortal and trapped in the middle of the dancers in the king’s ballroom until he agrees to play for the king. As for the king? Er- he’s someone or other. (coughs) Should I have added that in? Or can this stand alone?

Yes, that means the old man’s an immortal, too.

[charisstoma]

Grrrrr. Do you know how many drabbles there are out there right now?
This is just one. Yes, this is a good stand alone but there are so many questions that I'm interested to know more of the story. Ergo more.

The warm breaths on the boy's skin, but there doesn't appear to be anyone there, is erotic (should have been creepy but I didn't find it so.) The bright green eyes and touch of a hand on his chin *shivers in delight*

Those dancers should be dead by now. The god that's holding our captive should be getting to the point of trying another means to sweeten he up.
You have a storyteller. You could weave anything.
or
You could just leave this as a stand alone. *unhappy sigh*

[kittymarks]

*bursts out laughing* I could. But -- but -- okay, so I have no real reason to. If it makes you feel any better, the storyteller is on your side, at the moment.

Guilt!Storyteller: C’mon, you’ve gotta develop my character some more.
Guilt!Musician: And I am not staying with that-that creepy, sadistic-
Guilt!King: Who’s the one who’s refusing to play a little song for me, huh?
G!Storyteller: *shoves G!Musician and G!King off a cliff* As I was saying-

*laughing*

[charisstoma]

What you didn't see were the cleverly disguised bungy cords attached to the G!Musician and G!King so that they can crawl back up that cliff and while they are climbing one is trying to seduce the other. He's tried logic now it's time to pull out the big hard-ware and the breaths on skin, bright green eyes staring into eyes, dominating hand on face and soft teasing lips. Won't tell you where that other hand is..we'll leave that to your imagination. Suffice it to say..he's a god..at least in his mind.

Re: *laughing*

[kittymarks]

G!Storyteller: *peering down curiously at G!Musician and G!King* Hmm… *takes notes*
kittymarks: *staring incredulously*
G!Storyteller: *indignant* What? You know how kids are these days. Nothing short of rape will get their attention.
kittymarks: … seduction isn’t rape.
G!Storyteller: *goes back to taking notes* Close enough. No…even better. It’ll get the attention of those new-age adult things.

Re: *laughing*

[charisstoma]

*sighs* At least someone's writing. *snickers*