fic: The Long Exile {Chapter 5}

[kitsuneyujji]

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 5/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG, likely to go up eventually
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblance to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.
Summary: exile : noun 1 the state of being barred from one's homeland. 2

Comments

[xprissx]

OMG ! i love it !!! :)

can't wait for the next update !

cheerios !

[xprissx]

and i;m first ! :)

[feyla]

I'm not quite sure what I even want to say. I found this story a while ago and I don't remember commenting on it then. I don't always on stories that haven't been updated in a while. I really can't remember though. On the topic of this chapter though I loved the ending. Now I really want to know what's going to happen next. And I think I"m going to have to back and read the previous just to make sure I remember everything. This is very well-written though so that won't be hard at all. I've very much enjoyed reading it so far!

And my favorite line- “I think you depressed him even more with your story, BooJae...” Oh and the different methods they employed to try and entertain ChangMin. Especially the sock puppet. My Japanese professor used an alien puppet the other day in class and all I could think of was that. It was hilarious.

[crystaldee]

Ooooooohhhhh.......
Somewhat...this chapter is kinda depressed...
It's like Jae remembering the past life..

T_____T
There will be a war.....

Waiting for the next chapter!!!!!!! ^_____________^

[crimeis]

Humming. And applaud for your updates. I have been anticipating this story since forever. Okay lol. Exaggerating but I do love and enjoy reading this story. Addicting as it is, gosh I am curious for the next.

“You were always the prince.... even before I knew you.” - This ling tugged my heart. So romantic. :) Hehe. Waiting patiently for the next update. I love this story. Thank you. ♥

[ai_fantasy9]

this...is...SOOOOO GOOD! I really love this story and am always looking forward to the next update! Though it is a long wait between each chapter, the wait is really worth it :)

continue with the wonderful writing!! can't wait to read what is next!