fic: The Long Exile {Chapter 5}

[kitsuneyujji]

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 5/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG, likely to go up eventually
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblance to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.
Summary: exile : noun 1 the state of being barred from one's homeland. 2

Comments

[kenaressa]

It's getting more interesting the further we go...I like how you ended this chapter as well, it has a great sort of punch to it.

[yummyfruit]

wow. i wonder when jaejoong and yunho date or somethiing. and ahh, i hope..that that dream, well, i hope that jaejoong doesn't die..i dont want to se that happen. and yunho is soo cute being all protective♥

[orionsroad]

Ah! I've been waiting for this! :D I enjoy this story very much... and I really liked both 'halves' of this chapter. The first half was sweet, although the whole doomed thing is hanging over them qutie heavily. ;_; And the second half was just sweet - poor Changmin and his stupid hyung's attempts at entertainment (Sock puppets, Chunnie?! Lol, I would have shoved him off the bed too. XP) .

I'm wondering what will happen now though, with them finally knowing. I get the feeling Yunho knows more then he lets on...? I need to go re-read everything again I think. ^_^ Weee, Can't wait for mroe!

[sexineko]

EEEEEEKKKKKKKKKK! i love it <3333
you meanie, stopping there. >.<
I really love the interaction with JJ and Yunho, I read the whole story over again just before i wrote this comment. lol. I think im becoming obsessed o.O
never fear, i wont stalk you.. lol aaaaaaanyways if i havent freaked you out, please do update soon XD

[ara_niey]

wahhh~no wonder i've never come across you fic before..you sure take a long time posting your latest update..not that i mind though..hehe..

nice story..i love the way you mix between the past and the presence.and the fact that yunho is always the prince~^_^