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kitsune106

Oct 20, 2006 19:17

3rd Mission, and a co-mission.
( The Third Mission )

Comments 2

starsong24 October 21 2006, 06:02:52 UTC

Seems pretty good.

One thing: The SO's words should be in italics, not inside quote marks.

anonymous October 21 2006, 14:57:14 UTC

Awesome mission, but methinks you could have used someone to look over the spelling and such. Otherwise quite cool.