Well what I think is that this little snippet is VERY, VERY intriguing and that truthfully, it fits nicely in the other written part.
I think this is a concept worth developing with you showing us who and how Ezra thinks and feels with this new "brain" and does he, can he get back to himself or does he just go forward? Eventually, he's gotta return and I think this could be one of the most fascinating stories as we see what happens to Ezra and Chris' relationship. It's a wide open book and you'd do a great job of filling up the pages!
Sadly, I have never been touched with the idea of where to GO with this one! I honestly keep hoping some enterprising reader gets inspired to take it and run with it... you know, so I'm relieved of the pressure of a hanging chad, so to speak.
Thanks for your comments - I often think this is a little guy who gets left out in the cold alone. It's nice to know it does get read on occasion!
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I think this is a concept worth developing with you showing us who and how Ezra thinks and feels with this new "brain" and does he, can he get back to himself or does he just go forward? Eventually, he's gotta return and I think this could be one of the most fascinating stories as we see what happens to Ezra and Chris' relationship. It's a wide open book and you'd do a great job of filling up the pages!
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Thanks for your comments - I often think this is a little guy who gets left out in the cold alone. It's nice to know it does get read on occasion!
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