Comments | kissmychakram: Full Ahead, Slow

kissmychakram

Full Ahead, Slow

Apr 29, 2009 01:01

Olivia Spencer and Natalia Rivera had come to a compromise of sorts. They weren’t going to deny their fledgling love, nor were they going to actively persue it either. They were going to let it take its natural course. They were going to find comfortable, natural ground and see what happened.

And so it was that after Emma - the two foot, six ( Read more... )

guiding light

Comments 33

uselessmarks April 29 2009, 01:47:37 UTC

Oh Natalia... the sweetest woman ALIVE. Damn.

Great stuff, as always :D

kissmychakram April 29 2009, 22:15:49 UTC

Thank you.

I'm not completely happy with this. It's more or less what I intended to write, but insomina struck me and I dashed it off and it's not as finished as I would like. I had this idea of a nautical arc - starting with 'Damn The Torpedoes', this one and then 3 others 'Testing The Waters', 'Full Speed Ahead' and 'Taking the Plunge'.

If I write them (and I think I will) the last one will be my very first foray into smut!fic territory.

As ever, thanks for your kind comments.

uselessmarks April 30 2009, 01:35:54 UTC

I do enjoy a nautical theme in most everything and this is not exception ;)

And yay! Smut!fic!

calliopes_muse April 29 2009, 01:54:10 UTC

Gah, that was just sweetness overload! Between Bizzie and this, I think I'm getting cavities.

kissmychakram April 29 2009, 22:22:26 UTC

Thanks, Otalia brings out the sweetness in me, I'm usually a cynical so-and-so. I don't get to see the Bizzie, all I get to see is whatever is loaded to the Otaliafan YouTube channel - but I understand Bizzie is the cuteness, and so I thank you for the favourable comparison.

akasarahsmom April 29 2009, 02:26:21 UTC

“Sure, FYI - hand holding is permissible at all times.”

LOL... that's what a good assistant does, gives her all the necessary information to make the correct decisions. :)

Very nice.

kissmychakram April 29 2009, 22:24:16 UTC

LOL... that's what a good assistant does, gives her all the necessary information to make the correct decisions. :)

Absolutely, and if Olivia were to check her diary, she might find that she has a steamy kiss scheduled in her not too distant future.

Just saying.

Thanks for commenting.

akasarahsmom April 29 2009, 22:26:45 UTC

In the words of Emma....

YAY!

;)

ndasky1 April 29 2009, 04:13:04 UTC

Adorable! This made me smile. Thanks for posting!

kissmychakram April 29 2009, 22:28:25 UTC

Thanks ! Your feedback is always appreciated. Cheers !

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kissmychakram April 29 2009, 22:28:45 UTC

Thank you.