Full Ahead, Slow

[kissmychakram]

Olivia Spencer and Natalia Rivera had come to a compromise of sorts. They weren’t going to deny their fledgling love, nor were they going to actively persue it either. They were going to let it take its natural course. They were going to find comfortable, natural ground and see what happened.

And so it was that after Emma - the two foot, six

Comments

[ralst]

Very sweet.

[kissmychakram]

Thanks. Otalia is giving me diabetis. And I don't care !

[karjens40]

Oh I've missed the farmhouse. Wonderful setting for their first "real" date.

This was really beautiful. So many great parts. The way Natalia instantly checked to see if Olivia had worked too hard. The little bantering before Olivia turns into "Jump-Me Olivia." What an image that is. heh.

What Natalia says about holding hands was just totally swoon worthy.

[kissmychakram]

Thank you. I'm glad you picked up on the Natalia concern, I meant to make more of it, but I wrote this in the very early hours of the morning (my time - insomnia is a frequent flyer) and I didn't flesh this out as much as I wanted to.

Jump-Me Olivia may actually be the cause of my insomnia :)

As always, your comments are very much appreciated and I thank you.

[karjens40]

I think that what you wrote about her concern was perfect the way it was...subtle yet very telling.

[listener15]

Eeee! Hand holding is allowed all times! Yay! Oh god, I'm so gone on this couple that hand holding gives me warm fuzzies.

[kissmychakram]

Thanks, Otalia makes me so warm and so fuzzy, I swear that Steiff will be modelling a teddy bear on me soon.

[listener15]

If you find a button in your ear, then worry :-P

[kissmychakram]

Thanks !