fic: there's something funny in the air.

Jul 26, 2010 11:09

there's something funny in the air
(i can feel it like i can feel your laugh)
     eminem/david friendship, david/david pre-slash ; pg13 ; ~4000
     "There's a new guy in the class," is the first thing David says, and he says it in a rush, like he's been dying to say it all period.     (unbeta'd! please forgive any errors ( Read more... )

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kissesblow July 26 2010, 18:53:16 UTC
HOLY BIG TEXT BATMAN. I LOVE IT.

haha oh man it's just a little ~thing that i wrote. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT WHEN YOU FINALLY READ IT.

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mellowdee July 26 2010, 17:04:48 UTC
IOJERUCNDWIUNCIWUMWIUEMCWIUEDNCWIEFNCWIUSDMCIJWERMWINIWIWM

I HAVENT READ IT YET BUT IM FREAKING OUT AT HOW THERES NOW 4K OF THIS. OHMYCRAPFACE.

ILU.

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mellowdee July 26 2010, 18:00:30 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

OKAY I HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS ABOUT THIS.

I love how you transitioned everything to AU HS times.

I love how the friendship is established, how it comes FIRST.

I LOVE THEIR PLAYFUL BACK AND FORTH. HOW THEY KNOW EACH OTHER SO WELL.

I love how Cook's a DOOFUS and cheating at thumb wrestling.

I LOVE THAT COOK'S FRIENDS ARE ANDY AND NEAL.

I love how Marshall was worried that the whole friend of a friend of a friend thing was about him LOLZ. SORRY, NO MAKING OUT BETWEEN YOU GUYS.

I KIND OF LIKE HOW MARSHALL IS A RIDIC HUGE SOFTIE IN THIS. IS IT ONLY WHEN IT COMES TO DAVID? IS HE JUST A MORE NONANGRYATTHEWORLD SORTA GUY IN HS? DOES DAVID'S SMILE MAKE THINGS A LITTLE LESS RAGEY?

Also.

--M&M

I SEE THE PERFECTION.

Also. That entire last bit?

And Marshall invites him in, feeds him butter-free popcorn, and they sit on the couch, facing each other, and David tells him all about it.

It's like girltalk but replace the girls with DA and Eminem. YEAH.

OMGAH. WHAT STARTED OUT AS PAITAC BEING A RIDIC CRAZY ( ... )

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mellowdee July 26 2010, 18:01:02 UTC
I might be back with more feelings. I'm on heightened emotions as of late.

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kissesblow July 26 2010, 19:02:19 UTC
i would be happy to receive more feelings of yours. i heart your comments.

also: i hope the heightened emotions are a good thing? at least, most of the time? lmk if there's anything i can do, alright?

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kissesblow July 26 2010, 19:01:14 UTC
HEY YOU. YOU DON'T REALLY KNOW ME, BUT ILU SO HARD BECAUSE OF ALL YOUR DAVID/DAVID WRITING, I'M JUST SAYING. ♥

and THANK YOU FOR READING THIS & LIKING THIS & COMMENTING THIS! i'm so happy about it! :)

(marshallllll. <3)

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carolion July 26 2010, 18:09:31 UTC
Oof this was so cute. :3 Especially the interaction between Cook and Archie. And Marshall's perspective, of course. Awesome! I ADORED IT. <3

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kissesblow July 26 2010, 19:03:01 UTC
hey, thank you so much! ilu for your david/david fic, jsyk. <3 i'm glad you liked this strange little fic of mine! haha.

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asmallsmackerel July 26 2010, 19:31:48 UTC
WHY DID IT TAKE NEARLY EIGHTEEN YEARS FOR THIS TO BE IN MY LIFE?!Because, seriously, this wraps up pretty much everything that I love about fic into one ( ... )

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kissesblow July 26 2010, 22:56:42 UTC
YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO ME.

I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THIS STRANGE THING, HAHA.

I've loved Eminem since I was a little kid, and the picture that you painted of him here is one that I JUST SOAKED UP AND ACCEPTED AS REALITY.

fffffff i'm so glad that you, as a huge fan of eminem, LIKED THIS. OMGAH.

His willingness to beat up anyone for David, the fact that underneath his "thug" there's probably someone who has a slightly nerdy side

TRUTH. (i really see myself writing more eminem/david friendship fic in the near future, and i want his ~nerdy side to come out, just a little. i think i made him nerdy enough in this fic, because he watches boy meets world, HAHA.)

HE ACCEPTS THE FACT THAT HIS FRIEND IS GAY, WHICH IS AWESOME.

I'M REALLY HAPPY THAT CAME ACROSS. i mean, i figured it did, but -- i really wanted to have it so he doesn't even comment about it. like -- the only reason he's weirded out at first is because he thinks david's into HIM, like you said, haha. not that he's into guys at all. so, yay!

They freaking play Thumb War for ( ... )

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